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Eon · Post by **Eon** » Fri Aug 06, 2004 9:20 pm

Hi,
this is a trance track made by me. I used Cw pulsar and lot of VST's and everything was heard on behringer truth B2031.
Women voice is my design and lot of effect was used on her

EVERYTHING

Please feedback me so I can do corrections in the future setup job!!!

cheers

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Sat Aug 07, 2004 5:31 am

I am missing so much the sparkle in here, as if the track leans more on the low mid-section. Buildwise in arrangement this isn't bad at all, nor is the mix as even when this lasted ten minutes it wasn't really boring (plenty of varieties going on), but I'd say overall it sounds a bit dull with no real emphasis on single sounds, I guess I mean to say it is missing that magic spark.

How to find that magic spark?
I couldn't tell, but just try different settings in the mix/balance/panning/etc. Trial and error is about the only way to learn I guess.

Perhaps when I put it up at high volumes it'll sound better, but it's too early for that.

Eon · Post by **Eon** » Sat Aug 07, 2004 8:04 am

thanks Mystahr

I will use your suggestion, also I agree with you when you said that errors are only ways to put up next tracks on higher level

wgreenlee1 · Post by **wgreenlee1** » Sat Aug 07, 2004 3:38 pm

I like this....the breaks every now and then keep it from getting boring.
Cant imagine a club that wouldnt play it nor a person that wouldnt want to get up and dance to it.....
Over-all,very cool stuff.

VariKusBrainZ · Post by **VariKusBrainZ** » Sat Aug 07, 2004 6:20 pm

still listening to this, the beats sound very muddy, but then that might just be your style, I like that as its different. As mentioned before - lacking in the top end

Neuromancer · Post by **Neuromancer** » Sat Aug 07, 2004 6:33 pm

Disclaimer: I know absolutely nothing about Trance, so please view my comments accordingly...

I thought the sounds were very effective, as was the use of the vocal in the background. I don't feel the beats sounded too muddy, but you might want to revisit those at some point.

I thought this tune sounded very professional, albeit a bit 'predictable' for this style of music, if I can say that.

Overall however, I enjoyed the synth sounds/fx, and wasn't at all turned away by the overall arrangement or the use of the trance gates or arpeggiators(if I've got them labled correctly). I found the tune repetitive enough not to lose my attention, but at this length containing enough variety as to not feel bored, so complaints there.

nool · Post by **nool** » Sun Aug 08, 2004 3:49 am

hey you have all the right elements here - cool melodies, voice sample, etc, just gotta boost up the hi freqs a bit (try to do that over many instruments as opposed to just one) .. sometimes even boosting the highs of the kick can introduce a fuller balance ... just needs some more mixing and you got yourself a fine track

Eon · Post by **Eon** » Fri Aug 13, 2004 11:33 am

Thank you very much on your feedbacks.

I was on the sea on island Krk in Croatia so didnt respond in time but now I will.

I'll use your suggestions in my future work and thanks on good and I fell not so bad comments on this.
Soon I will send my new tracks to update my knowlegde with your oppininios.

Cheers
Eon

annode · Post by **annode** » Fri Aug 13, 2004 5:48 pm

Not a fan of the disco beat style trance...but you did good with this technically.
See lots of promise coming to your future work.

If you can,try to listen to what`s happening in the trance genre these days,and try to update your resorces.
As your technique improves,so will your ability to incorporate more modern safistication.
The sounds and rhythm styles used here are dated in my experience.
Philadelphia now sucks for trance clubs,(all hip-hop now),so i`ve been behind a few yrs on the present techniques.

Keep up the good work!

Eon · Post by **Eon** » Sun Aug 15, 2004 11:21 am

yes as you said this track was made before year and maybe more I do not really know.

I have new tracks with better sounds and newest arrangments...I will send it these days so waiting for replyies

thanks a lot for your answer

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