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nirnaethmusic · Post by **nirnaethmusic** » Tue Aug 10, 2004 12:25 pm

Hello !

I would have feedbacks about one of my compositions :
Crazy inside

I know...the mix is bad but give my your opinions about the others stuff...melody, ambiance, sounds....etc

thanks you

nirnaethmusic · Post by **nirnaethmusic** » Wed Aug 11, 2004 2:11 pm

ok there is nobody on this forum who could give me feedbacks about my song ???

Am i the invisible man or what ??

I thought of having advices on this forum but I see that it is not the case.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Wed Aug 11, 2004 2:23 pm

nirnaethmusic wrote:ok there is nobody on this forum who could give me feedbacks about my song ???

Am i the invisible man or what ??

I thought of having advices on this forum but I see that it is not the case.

I takes a bit...and not everybody has DSL, so the time to DL might be too long.

I'm DLing now...I'll get back with you on it...perhaps check out some other peoples songs while you wait.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Wed Aug 11, 2004 2:29 pm

Nice song! Maybe turn the wind sound down a bit, so you can hear the rest better....nice work tho'.

bluedad · Post by **bluedad** » Wed Aug 11, 2004 2:30 pm

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first couple of minutes - the piano is just buried with everything swirling around it.
change at 2;40 is nice
drums need some work, they're kind of lame.
the mix could use some help; there's so much in the high freq range - no bottom end.
and it ends rather abruptly!

nirnaethmusic · Post by **nirnaethmusic** » Wed Aug 11, 2004 2:59 pm

thanks for you interesting feebacks !!

yes it ends rather abruptly because it's only an extact of the whole piece....like you said mr.me not everybody have DSL

but anyway i want to delete the rest of the song so in the futur it will end in a better way.

yes in fact the mastering of this song is not very good ans i nedd to rework on it.

more feedbacks please

Crazy inside....your feedbacks about this music