Plight of a Dreamer, by Hink

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Mind you again, I don't profess to being a singer but I do the best I can, I'm a guitar player and song writer. This is another older song of mine...but yesterday it got downloaded quite a bit, still hasn't caught up to my Sleeping Giant but I figured I'd run it up the flagpole and see if anyone salutes... :hihi:
it's called Plight of a Dreamer I hope you like it....BTW I am looking for band members :help: in my area, see the news section of my page... :)
The highest form of knowledge is empathy, for it requires us to suspend our egos and live in another's world. It requires profound, purpose‐larger‐than‐the‐self kind of understanding.

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owe...bumped my head :roll:
The highest form of knowledge is empathy, for it requires us to suspend our egos and live in another's world. It requires profound, purpose‐larger‐than‐the‐self kind of understanding.

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Good song.
Very good guitar playing.
Your singing is OK (I wish I could sing)
But the mix needs a lot of work.
The drums and bass are way overpowered by the guitars. Also I would add a little synth pad in the background (just 4 bar long cords) to pull everything together.
What DAW are you using?

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remember, never let the lead guitar player do the mix
:hihi:
seriously, guitars overpower everything, so you might want to tend to that.
as suggested, a pad would be nice. If this were my tune, i'd be tempted to use crystal and put some kind of rhythmic pad with syncing lfo's, just for electronic texture.
but all that said, I do like the song.

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bluedad wrote:remember, never let the lead guitar player do the mix
:hihi:
seriously, guitars overpower everything, so you might want to tend to that.
as suggested, a pad would be nice. If this were my tune, i'd be tempted to use crystal and put some kind of rhythmic pad with syncing lfo's, just for electronic texture.
but all that said, I do like the song.
thanx guys...@ bluedad too true...but I'm it right now everybody else got old...ok I did too but I refuse to accept it... :lol:
The highest form of knowledge is empathy, for it requires us to suspend our egos and live in another's world. It requires profound, purpose‐larger‐than‐the‐self kind of understanding.

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