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jens wrote:- does that mean my productions skills have slightly improved during the last year? :-)
anyhow, this is the most outstanding track i've heard from you ever, jens (too bad there's no singer, tho) ! 8)

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Freeztar wrote:
jens - This is well done, but it didn't do much for me. I like the sounds and arrangement. Maybe bringing the guitar in earlier would help.
thanks, Freeztar :D

I'm totally cool with that it's not your cup of tea but I highly appreciate that you write it that it's well done. :-)

Tbh I'm especially proud of that moment when it suddenly turns into some sort of indi-guitar-thing when you would expect it the least while listening to it for the first time. I love to play with genres and to abuse them. :wink:

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Ixox wrote:Thanks everybody for the votes and Hms so far..... :D
I'm happy my little live street band track works for some of you... Tanks a lot.
Robert Randolph wrote:Is it ok to vote for only 4 songs?
I can help you here...
Add mine in your list and you'll get 5 songs....

Guys, still 5 free slots !!
haha :)

Ok, I got my 5 songs then. .. waiting to find out if voting for 5 is kosher.

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Wopelka wrote:
jens wrote:- does that mean my productions skills have slightly improved during the last year? :-)
anyhow, this is the most outstanding track i've heard from you ever, jens (too bad there's no singer, tho) ! 8)
:shock:

- what about my other tunes then :? :cry:


:lol:


Thanks, Wopelka :D

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Mystahr wrote: Jens - I can imagine not having your favorite vocalist around had you thinking of not entering. I'm glad you decided to enter anyhow :hug: Quite the energetic tune and cool entry from your hands

Thanks you, Mark :hug:

I'm working with a new singer (male this time :o ) on a new project (with the guitars more up-front than with TorpedoTorpedo) and this is one of the tunes for it.

The vocal-melody and lyrics are done already, we just didn't manage to record the vocals in time for the competition. :-)

So it will have vocals finally, Wopelka :D

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Robert Randolph wrote:I dont like electric music much at all yet really... Im still warming up to it. Jens was brilliant though I think.
:o :oops: thanks, Robert :D

Please vote in any case. :hihi:

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Robert Randolph wrote:
Ixox wrote:Thanks everybody for the votes and Hms so far..... :D
I'm happy my little live street band track works for some of you... Tanks a lot.
Robert Randolph wrote:Is it ok to vote for only 4 songs?
I can help you here...
Add mine in your list and you'll get 5 songs....

Guys, still 5 free slots !!
haha :)

Ok, I got my 5 songs then. .. waiting to find out if voting for 5 is kosher.

may i write an application letter for à 6th vote?

:D

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:lol: i got a hm

thanks rsmus :nutter: :lol:
:ud:

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vurt wrote::lol: i got a hm

thanks rsmus :nutter: :lol:
if you had played ONE note of OnePingOnly somewhere in the middle, i'd have voted for you... :wink:

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vurt wrote::lol: i got a hm

thanks rsmus :nutter: :lol:
HM for the courage to do such a cover :lol: :lol: :lol:
sound is vibration, vibration is life

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Ixox wrote:Thanks everybody for the votes and Hms so far..... :D
I'm happy my little live street band track works for some of you... Tanks a lot.
Robert Randolph wrote:Is it ok to vote for only 4 songs?
I can help you here...
Add mine in your list and you'll get 5 songs....

Guys, still 5 free slots !!
Yes, Ixox definitely deserves a vote!

And if pheeleep was allowed to vote for only five, then RR should also!
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Robert R

Could you not vote for the remaining six based on production quality/techniques?.

Ben

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Thanks to Baggio, Cheeso and Rsmus7 for the votes.

Its made my day :D

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Wopelka wrote:
vurt wrote::lol: i got a hm

thanks rsmus :nutter: :lol:
if you had played ONE note of OnePingOnly somewhere in the middle, i'd have voted for you... :wink:

i did actually think about having something very loud directly in the middle just a half second glitch or something,but i then worried about others speakers,ears

see i do love you all :love:
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Comments, in order of the songs saved on my disk. I don't give a damn if your names or the titles are all correct, adding proper ID tags shouldn't be too hard and I can't be arsed to actually compare the files on my disk to what is shown in WinAmp.
Also, I'm not into buttkissing at all, remind that.

- Markleford -
Great idea, laughed my ass off. Done well too. Sound is a tad cheesy, but that might just suit the song fine. Unfortunately Sleek didn't even enter this month...

- Seperitoh -
Nice use of GPO. Like the melody development. To my ears the acoustic arpeggios don't fit all the time, but maybe that's your intention.

- Andreas Ehrhardt -
Too much layered. the orchestral sounds mash up most everything. Plus, they are sounding too harsh for my old ears as well (same goes for the piano). Musical intention is unclear to me.

- Barnadine -
Nice acoustic guit, get's lost a bit during the vocal passage, maybe due to the "soundscapish" stuff happening there as well. I'd prefer it without any of those things.

- Beardedone -
Weird jazzy stuff, done well. Perhaps I wouldn't listen to it if I had the choice, but that doesn't say much. Liked some older entries better.

- Donkey Tugger -
too much biting mids, but I allready know you like it that way. Don't like the groove on this one, but again, that's only my taste. Selection of sounds IMO is so-so-ish. As said, sooo much mids...

- Duncan Parsons -
Funny stuff. Sounds to me like some comedian having an attempt at singing - but maybe that's what it's meant to be like. Unfortunately some of the sounds are really cheesy (namely the lead and clavinet). Can't say much more.

- fst -
Doesn't tell me anything. Some groove, some chords, some noodling, some arps, all not exactly excellent IMO. No melody but also no spectacular sound FX or noodling to keep my interest awake. Sorry, I allready said I'm not into butt kissing, so that's just my opinion.

- Glooper -
Vocals hidden too much, both by frequency and room information. When you turn the volume lower they're barely understandable anymore. I also think you could've concentrated on the verse melody a bit more.

- Ixox -
You must have some weird holidays to do things such as this. But I like it in a way. For my taste the brass backings could be a tad more upfront, but then... not sure.

- Lady J -
Excellent production. Vocoder could be a bit better in terms of understandability. Too much of a snipplet though (I allready told you I'd prefer specialized 2 minute versions for them contests).

- nikp2000 -
Not sure whether the grooves all not fitting thing is intentional, but unfortunately that doesn't make it for me.
Melody could enter earlier and be evolved.

- Patrick9 -
Mixture of sounds is not up my alley. But maybe I'm too much oldfashioned then.

- rsmus7 -
Not bad but lacks concreteness to qualify as a tune (liked your Cameleon ambient stuff better, at least the sound have time to evolve there). Guitar sound-ish noddling is just that, noodling, doesn't seem to fit any purpose.

- You -
Being no native english speaker, I don't get what the samples are all about (or where they're coming from), but execution is OK. Found it to be too repetitive from a formal aspect.

- Thomas Christensen -
Not sure whether I get the intention of this at all. Unfortunately the melodica is way out of intonation at times, and personally I don't like that too much (even if it might've been intentionally).

- Blue Days -
Doesn't add anything to the original but cheese - for me it's rather tasteless. Ends WAY to abruptly too. I know it's a snipplet, but that's not what these contests are about.

- EarthTones -
Yeah well, 80-ish... can't say much else, just didn't catch my attention. Singing isn't too bad though.

- Andrew Simon -
Can't say much about it. Intentional meaning unclear. For a melodic piece it lacks of melodic development, for a soundscape thing it covers too much information, for a demo it's not sounding well enough. Just my opinion, as usual.

- astanine -
Hm, game music. OLD game music that is. Wouldn't happen to know under which circumstances I'd like listening to such things.

- Bagungie -
Get some guitar player to play these guitars. They sound way too artificial. Song idea is OK, sounds don't make it much IMO.

- Col G -
Can't comment much on this one. Wouldn't happen being able to describe it even. Sounds sequenced. But well, that's what it is.

- Dave Spiers -
My top one this month. And, unlike others, I love the little blurbs (where those original DT snipplets?).
Great playing, great sound. Top notch!

- Dr. Apostrophe X -
Idea not bad but way too repetitive for me. Getting better at around 1:05 but still...

- El Baggio -
Doesn't mean much to me. Doesn't exactly make my foot tap either as the groove is *somewhere*. Flute is horribly out of tune too. Apart from the synth bits it sounds like an end 60's hippie session.

- Erki -
Would need more time to evolve. Not dramatic enough for 2 minutes. Good background music for a movie perhaps.

- Freeztar -
Typical latin ballad-ish stuff, but I like it. Unfortunately the sound (especially the vocals) isn't too great.
No idea whether the samba-ish part fits or not - not my taste and more sounding like something such as "oh, I need to add something else".

- Garret Grengler -
Top stuff, almost as usual. Nice arrangement, like your voice as well, good playing! End part is a bit falling off in terms of musical quality (but that might just be me).

- Guitarjeff -
Excellent execution, not my taste at all though (has got nothing to do with the fact of Ted Nugent being one of the most clueless assholes around). In fact, I hate just about everything in such sort of music, the grooves, the meaningless guitar noodling just for the sake of it being there, the style of singing, everything. If I could ban one style of music from the world, this had high chances to be it.
Still, you are mastering this style very well and that's why it's one of the absolutely best entries this month, especially considering the fact that you managed to do a complete composition fitting very well in the 2 minute limit. To put it shortly: Execution: 100%, taste: 0%. Just my opinion of course.
At least you got the longest comment...

- Haghi -
Misses some vocals. Like that chaotic guitar stuff in a way, but to make it listenable for me it'd require some vocals or at least some melody (even if I don't think any instrumental melody would do the job)

- Ceyecal -
Music for a movie perhaps. Not that bad, but I didn't find the synth lead to blend too well with the orchestral stuff.

- fell (AKA jdg) -
I really can't comment on such things. Seems to be brilliantly produced, but I'm just not much into all these ambient/electronic soundscapes. I do however like the groove a lot. Might perhaps even get a vote for the production value (but I'm not there yet).

- Jebudas -
Not sure what this is meant to be. Lacks of any real melody. Soundscape for a movie at best, but for that quality should perhaps be better.

- Jeff Dickens -
Another soundscape thing. Can't comment on the music at all. Heard better productions I think - but even that is hard to say.

- Jens Leuner -
You should indeed add some vocals quickly. In this case, I somewhat like the mixture of traditional sounds (guits) and electro. I also like the blend of more background-ish stuff and some in-your-face sounds.
Still, it needs some melody (or whatever sort of singing). And well, the guitars could sound better too, they seem to be a bit muddy (maybe using less overdrive would be a trick).

- knockman -
There's a certain compositional aspect in this that I just like a lot. I wouldn't say this would be music I'd listen to, but I like the weirdness of it, while still drawing a composition line all throughout.
Certainly one of my faves just for that.

- Koorby -
Richard Clayderman, eh? At least the beginning is. Not too bad though, when the orchestral stuff enters.
But the melody remains to be clayderman-ish. Maybe a good title theme for some movie. Done well, just a bit too pathetic for my taste.

- Kriminal -
Dancey. But then, for some real dance stuff some of the sounds could eventually be more brutal (leads and filter sweeps) or pumping (bass). Not bad though.

- Mr.Me -
Dunno what to say about it, not my style and it seems I've heard better sounds for such sort of music.

- Mystahr -
Doesn't give me much. For a dancey tune it lacks some pumping, for anything else I miss any sort of melody.

- Nuisances Sonores -
Oh yes, I've expected some weirdness. Fat sounds for sure. Love some of them. Can't say much else, maybe I'm indeed too oldfashioned. Just tell me, is there a metrum or so anywhere?

- peppy197 -
Strange stuff, can't say more.

- Pheeleep -
Somewhat minimalistic in a way (at least to me). Would perhaps need more time to evolve. Could imagine listening to some of such music on late saturday nights when the hangover slightly walks in.

- pHz -
Great use of loops. Personally I'd prefer to have it a bit more dancey as the groove per se is cool.

- Plunge -
I didn't expect no less but brilliant quality, and this meets my expectations just fine. I just like your singing and piano playing. A tad beatle-ish. Top stuff, and very well fitiing the 2 min limit again.

- RayS -
The melody gets boring pretty fast IMO. Actually, in my case, I wanted to stop it after 1 minute allready, but I was hoping for something else to happen... Sorry, but totally not up my alley.


- Richie Bee -
Not bad, still sounding a bit artificial at times (the horns that is). I like the intention though.

- Rusted Monkey -
Sound is killing me. Too much high mids, no way to sort out individual instruments properly. In case you played those guitars realtime they're not too bad though.

- sdunn1110 -
Apart from some "additional" stuff it sounds like some GM synth demo. Sorry, not my COT at all.

- Shane Sanders -
Personally I don't like this as much as some of your other stuff, but it seems to be very well executed again. Your percussion programming is allways top notch. Just the melodic stuff didn't catch me much.

- Sonic Six -
Don't know what this is supposed to be like. For any sort ov movie/soundscape the sounds aren't lush enough.

- Spyro -
Great sound. Also quite some good mixture of rap and singing. Nice groove too, and some fine additional sounds. Ends a bit abrupt. Still, among my faves.

- sttjelle -
In case it has to be soundscape-ish, this is how it has to be. Has all the required deepness. I wish it'd be longer so I could see where it goes to. Very nice!

- Synthpoop -
Found the used sounds to be uninspiring. Also a bit too repetitive. The loop is killing my ears in terms of high mid-useage.

- Mo Verdigast -
Can't comment again. Sounds, yeah well... dunno. Something ambient, might have it's niche to fit in. As said, can't comment, not even on the production side of things.

- vishalshetye -
Not my style, but apparently done pretty much OK. The groove is really pumping well. Don't like the accordion break though. Also, as others allready mentioned, the voice needs to be raised.

- vurt -
Well, all the jokes and intelligent comments about 4'33" have allready been made, so this isn't anything new at all.
If you ever listened to the original (I doubt many people commenting on it ever had) you would also know that there's something else going on but pure silence. The thing was recorded live and you can actually hear quite some noise there, such as musicians swapping pages and the occasional bits from the audience as well.
If I had made an attempt at this, I'd have at least recorded myself switching some synth patches ("silence 001" to "silence 002") with my mouse or so (as silent as possible of course).
As it is, it's just nothing else but what it is: nothing!

- wilkoryte -
Hm, too oldfashioned, even for an old blues rocker like me. You should at least have added a theme (maybe played doubled by organ and guitar or so). Timing of the solo guitar is a tad funny too (even if that might be intentional).

- windchillfactor -
Voice gets covered too much by everything else. Apart from that I can't comment.

- Wopelka -
Weird tune, but makes sense. Good groove programming. Not my COT but as said, it makes sense.

- TheSystemERA -
Drums are WAY too low in the mix! Too much ear injuring high mids as well, couldn't listen through headphones without gettting seriously disturbed.
In case I was producing it, I'd tell you to straighten out the groove. But that might only be me.

- Yagushi -
Funny stuff. Can't say more about the music. Production seems good.

- Tancos -
Yeah well, you surely found your style. Unfortunately my english is too bad to understand all the text. Pretty much zappa-ish (the deep synth especially). Production is great. I like it.

- aMUSEd -
Heh, was it that you wanted the spoken words links for?
I don't understand the text well enough to translate it, but the concept of the whole thing is working well. Reminds me to some of the poetry/music freestyle things that got popular a while ago.

- Bastien Phelps -
Not a bad groove, but doesn't keep me interested after a while, no melody and not enough evolving things.

- Tristeza -
Usually your stuff isn't my COT, but I liked this one - until the beat starts, that is! God, this beat is cheesy! Try some halftime groove or so!

- Farlukar -
Too compressed it seems (at least the drums are). Can't comment much more as there's not much going on which would keep me interested.


That was it.
Sorry if I missed anyone, but I think I got all the (working) downloads.
There are 3 kinds of people:
Those who can do maths and those who can't.

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