Song

[cobalt]

I wrote this song last year shortly after starting into computer music recording. It's very simple. I intend to re-do it, but the basic idea is there. Review anyone?

link to song:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Download ... ID=1533243

link to song info:
www.soundclick.com/cobalt

Thanks!

[annode]

Liked the sounds you used here!
That bowed sound is great.

Also really want that chick in the advert on your page...the one from the "cupid Juction"advert...oou la la.

[xoxos]

odd mood, peaceful but particular. it kind of reminds me of the orgy music from conan 1 remixed for china cup set :p phrasing is nicely executed, smooth, fits. play on :p

[VicDiesel]

Sweet sounds and good motiffs, but not enough variation, too much repetition, for my taste. Around 3:00 I was getting a bit bored. Then there was some new stuff, but I think you were hanging on the dominant for way too long there.

And then at 4:30 all the old stuff starts again.

Maybe compress this piece a bit?

V.

[SuitcaseOfLizards]

Nice tune. Plenty of space in it, not overpowering at all. A little variation would be nice indeed, maybe change instruments at abouut 2:00 for a bit? I might also possibly suggest a bit of a far-background pad synth to provide some sonic fill, for a long tune it's possibly *too* instrumentally minimalistic.

Just my two cents worth!

[cobalt]

Thanks for all the nice and helpful comments. I agree that the piece is repetitive and needs more variation. (I think it's only 7 tracks or something). I'll think about what was said when I (eventually) re-do the thing. Thanks for listening and responding!

[mystahr]

I especially liked the continual dark cello-ish sound that could do well with an answering/competing pad as wooleyloach suggested. I like the basic structure of the melody lines and the sound chosen for it. It gives it a rather airey feel.

Would be interested to see where you would take this

Welcome to KvR btw