Tunca - Heaven is out!

[tunca]

Glad to share my new single!

You can find it on all digital platforms!

https://www.deezer.com/tr/album/61708042

https://open.spotify.com/album/0LN8sgyKO12Rh3QYOzfXN5

https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/heave ... 1373700398

[ChamMusic]

I thought there were some very effective melodic ideas on the vocals and the tone / overall performance of the vocals is excellent.

But too many other elements just didn't work for me...

The general production is well done, but throughout the piece I felt that the choice of timbres could be improved...they didn't all blend effectively...possibly because too many of them are quite similar?

1 min 36 secs: this section seems seriously messy compared to the chilled vibe before it...doesn't work for me.

1 min 46 secs: Main ideas kick back in and it all seems slightly out of sync now?

2 min 28 secs or so: all seems to kick back into sync again?

3 mins 2 secs: keyboard solo kicks in for the final section...
Maybe a bit too long for a short pop song - over a minute!
Also for my ear, there are a lot of inappropriate note choices in this context - a simple pop song with such straightforward background harmonies. Rhythmically it's quite a lively well developed solo, but the note choices just don't work for me.

Apologies if that seems a bit negative over all?

[tunca]

I thought there were some very effective melodic ideas on the vocals and the tone / overall performance of the vocals is excellent.

But too many other elements just didn't work for me...

The general production is well done, but throughout the piece I felt that the choice of timbres could be improved...they didn't all blend effectively...possibly because too many of them are quite similar?

1 min 36 secs: this section seems seriously messy compared to the chilled vibe before it...doesn't work for me.

1 min 46 secs: Main ideas kick back in and it all seems slightly out of sync now?

2 min 28 secs or so: all seems to kick back into sync again?

3 mins 2 secs: keyboard solo kicks in for the final section...
Maybe a bit too long for a short pop song - over a minute!
Also for my ear, there are a lot of inappropriate note choices in this context - a simple pop song with such straightforward background harmonies. Rhythmically it's quite a lively well developed solo, but the note choices just don't work for me.

Apologies if that seems a bit negative over all?

Hi!

Thanks for your thoughts! Glad to hear! No matter negative or positive

My main style is not electronic based. This song is just for fun project. It's my first electronic/pop song. Just wanted to share it with people.

I know this song is not well produced and not even ready to publish but it's fine to me.

Second part of song is completely un-synced.Then synced again.

I can improve myself (about electronic music) with your thoughts.

Thanks!