Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

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LickBasil
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42 posts since 18 May, 2018

Post Fri Jul 13, 2018 10:20 am


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wagtunes
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13431 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

Post Fri Jul 13, 2018 11:46 am

My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 7.5

Overall - 8.75

Comments: Mix sounds a little bit muddy, distorted. IDK. Something is off. Can't put my finger on it. It's not horrible. It's just off. Maybe somebody else who is more technical knows what I'm hearing. Maybe it's just too loud. Anyway, like the music. It's quirky. Like the synth sounds and the performance is fine. Just that mix bothers me.

fastlanephil
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594 posts since 3 Jan, 2016

Re: Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

Post Sat Jul 14, 2018 5:01 pm

I found it to be interesting but rather confusing. Is this a genre?

I hear a female voice but I can't make out a word of it.

LickBasil
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42 posts since 18 May, 2018

Re: Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

Post Sat Jul 14, 2018 10:41 pm

wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 7.5

Overall - 8.75

Comments: Mix sounds a little bit muddy, distorted. IDK. Something is off. Can't put my finger on it. It's not horrible. It's just off. Maybe somebody else who is more technical knows what I'm hearing. Maybe it's just too loud. Anyway, like the music. It's quirky. Like the synth sounds and the performance is fine. Just that mix bothers me.
It's odd you say its too loud because I actually refrained from making it intentionally loud as I do all my other songs. Thanks!
fastlanephil wrote:I found it to be interesting but rather confusing. Is this a genre?

I hear a female voice but I can't make out a word of it.
I found this person online, she is from south Africa. I don't understand what is confusing about it. It seems to be a straight-forward song :) .

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J. Smith
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27 posts since 2 Jul, 2014 from Kajaani, Finland

Re: Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

Post Sun Jul 15, 2018 2:07 am

I like the atmosphere and the progression, getting good vibes from this! But I think the vocals should be much more upfront - you say it's pop after all. Then it would actually be a leading vocal :) The mix is a bit muddy and could breathe more.

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melomood
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312 posts since 15 Oct, 2017 from U.S.

Re: Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

Post Sun Jul 15, 2018 2:17 am

It sounds like an unspecified genre because all the signals from each instrument are having it out with each other in an over comped battlefield & the voice does not sit in the mix well at all

hindering what would otherwise be a pretty damn good song

sorry bout it

LickBasil
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42 posts since 18 May, 2018

Re: Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

Post Sun Jul 15, 2018 1:16 pm

Horizon Flow wrote:I like the atmosphere and the progression, getting good vibes from this! But I think the vocals should be much more upfront - you say it's pop after all. Then it would actually be a leading vocal :) The mix is a bit muddy and could breathe more.
melomood wrote:It sounds like an unspecified genre because all the signals from each instrument are having it out with each other in an over comped battlefield & the voice does not sit in the mix well at all

hindering what would otherwise be a pretty damn good song

sorry bout it
that's all that matters to me! Thanks for listening!

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wagtunes
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13431 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

Post Sun Jul 15, 2018 1:46 pm

LickBasil wrote:
wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 7.5

Overall - 8.75

Comments: Mix sounds a little bit muddy, distorted. IDK. Something is off. Can't put my finger on it. It's not horrible. It's just off. Maybe somebody else who is more technical knows what I'm hearing. Maybe it's just too loud. Anyway, like the music. It's quirky. Like the synth sounds and the performance is fine. Just that mix bothers me.
It's odd you say its too loud because I actually refrained from making it intentionally loud as I do all my other songs. Thanks!
fastlanephil wrote:I found it to be interesting but rather confusing. Is this a genre?

I hear a female voice but I can't make out a word of it.
I found this person online, she is from south Africa. I don't understand what is confusing about it. It seems to be a straight-forward song :) .
That's why I used the word "maybe." I honestly don't know what it is about the mix that bothers me. It just doesn't sound quite right.

experimental.crow
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5510 posts since 9 Mar, 2003 from The Druid Hills

Re: Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

Post Mon Jul 16, 2018 7:46 am

a not so good , very bad mix ...
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Aloysius
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22099 posts since 11 Aug, 2008 from a computer

Re: Basil - I'M COMING (2018) (POP)

Post Mon Jul 16, 2018 8:23 am

I can feel emotion right from the intro. I like the beat very much overall. The progression is a memorable hook.

The vocals sound out of tune in places. They are mixed so low that I can't make out a single word. The track has the potential to sound very professional.

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