KVR Audio

janke · Post by **janke** » Wed Aug 15, 2018 9:51 pm

https://soundcloud.com/janke-e/bluetrain

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed Aug 15, 2018 11:07 pm

ooo i like the composition, sounds AND mix on this one. whatever you did, keep doing it.
good job

Eauson · Post by **Eauson** » Thu Aug 16, 2018 1:04 am

Couple of little resonant peaks @ the beginning, but this rolls along nicely, after the breakdown it starts to really chug along, would enjoy a longer version

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Sat Aug 18, 2018 12:30 am

vocals @1:45 : whose the woman ?

ChamMusic · Post by **ChamMusic** » Sat Aug 18, 2018 5:48 pm

Overall it works well...production in particular is tight, punchy, but still warm! Love the 'train' rhythm that grows.

One Point: The spoken vocals...I would pull back the delay a little bit to make them more intelligible maybe?

2nd Point: That 'gated' melody towards the end is quite strong but might be even better with an extra 'non-gated' layer to help the tune sing?

htcnext2 · Post by **htcnext2** » Sat Aug 18, 2018 7:19 pm

The vocals in the beginning - Ursula Rucker I guess, sounds like. Nicely done.
HM

janke · Post by **janke** » Sun Aug 19, 2018 6:19 pm

hi i got voices from smithonian i dont know the name of here