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PI CRIMSON · Post by **PI CRIMSON** » Wed Oct 10, 2018 7:23 pm

https://soundcloud.com/picrimson/picrimson-tokyotrouble

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Wed Oct 10, 2018 7:52 pm

My Feedback

Music - 5
Instruments - 6
Performance - 5
Mix - 5

Overall - 5.25

Comments: The stuttering was annoying. The vocals are too low. Need to be brought up more. Musically, there isn't much too it. It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements. The main synth is too loud and dry. Needs more air (EQ). On the plus side, I've heard worse.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:35 am

wagtunes wrote: ↑Wed Oct 10, 2018 7:52 pm It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements.

yeah, this should have been a 7 second song

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:55 am

layzer wrote: ↑Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:35 am
wagtunes wrote: ↑Wed Oct 10, 2018 7:52 pm It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements.

yeah, this should have been a 7 second song
Hey Layzer, did you hear. I'm going to be doing my first Trance CD. Taking bets on how big a disaster it's going to be.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Thu Oct 11, 2018 10:03 am

wagtunes wrote: ↑Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:55 am
layzer wrote: ↑Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:35 am
wagtunes wrote: ↑Wed Oct 10, 2018 7:52 pm It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements.

yeah, this should have been a 7 second song
Hey Layzer, did you hear. I'm going to be doing my first Trance CD. Taking bets on how big a disaster it's going to be.
should be an easy enough CD project to write up a dozen 7 second motifs and stretch them each to about 5 minutes long!

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Thu Oct 11, 2018 10:05 am

layzer wrote: ↑Thu Oct 11, 2018 10:03 am
wagtunes wrote: ↑Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:55 am
layzer wrote: ↑Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:35 am
wagtunes wrote: ↑Wed Oct 10, 2018 7:52 pm It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements.

yeah, this should have been a 7 second song
Hey Layzer, did you hear. I'm going to be doing my first Trance CD. Taking bets on how big a disaster it's going to be.
should be an easy enough CD project to write up a dozen 7 second motifs and stretch them each to about 5 minutes long!
Well, I'm going to try to be a little more creative than that, but yeah, I do get what you mean after listening to a bunch of these.

New bouncy House-Song, Feedback appreciated!