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azra · Post by **azra** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 10:06 pm

I have a problem and i need some help from someone.

I think i just lost a girfriend which I love and in those moments of that stupid feeling i found some inspiration and wrote a song.

I would like to send her the song but i dont know if it sucks and i would like to her a thought from someone who know something about music and to find is it a good idea to send her that.

Its a ballad in my language and you probably wont understand the words but some advice from someone on mastering that and if it sucks is more then welcomed.

If some good soul would like to help me please sand me a pm whit his e-mail and i would send him the song
by the e-mail because i dont have a place where to put it on net.

Please dont blame me for putting this topic here where i know it doesnt bellong but i know that there is someone here who can help me and i dont have much time to make a decission to send that or not.

putte · Post by **putte** » Tue Oct 05, 2004 12:00 am

azra .. i can host it for you man .. and welcome at kvr ..

just send me a pm
cheers .. and then you´ll find the advices.

putte

Steven West · Post by **Steven West** » Tue Oct 05, 2004 2:16 am

Putte - you really are a Superman!

It's nice to see a nice gesture like that. Makes me feel good inside to see such a good person on the outside.

Stick with Putte Azra, and best of luck in your song's abilities.

azra · Post by **azra** » Tue Oct 05, 2004 5:46 pm

Thanks tu Putte who was more than kind im able to give the link to anyone who would like to give me his toughts.

http://www.we-are-billions.com/putte/zeugs/oblak.mp3

And one more thing , please dont be to cruel because this is my first recording ever and im not a good guitar player and not a good singer too.

Thanks again Putte

mckenic · Post by **mckenic** » Tue Oct 05, 2004 8:46 pm

Hi Azra,

I dont understand the words but that is unimportant - this is a beautiful tune!

Send it to her - NOW!

Very Tom Waits/Leonard Cohen feel to the track!

And one more thing , please dont be to cruel because this is my first recording ever and im not a good guitar player and not a good singer too.

If this is your first effort I cant wait to hear more of what you do!

Its Beautiful - Thanks for sharing it (and thanks Putte for the help letting us hear this)!

Dave

Steven West · Post by **Steven West** » Tue Oct 05, 2004 9:21 pm

My sentiments as well. This is a very beautiful song! And for a first attempt at all this stuff, you did a fantastic job!

Great playing and singing. I don't know the language either - but your emotions cerainly tell me the feeling of the song. The intro made me think of Chris Issak for some reason - and I LIKE Chris Issak.

(I'm sure many a KVR member just said 'what?'

) Leonard Cohen's 'Suzanne' as well - you're right there with that classic too.
Simon & Garfunkel. Good vibes Azra, good vibes!

You've got GREAT potential Azra. For a first time out with your music, it's really something!

Kudos to Superman Putte again as well. Great catch to reel in.

sonicfire · Post by **sonicfire** » Tue Oct 05, 2004 9:27 pm

azra, i feel with you

the same happend to me about an year ago, i still cant stop thinking on that girl... i also wrote a tune ... but never finished it and never sent it to her.
well, dont know if this would have changed anything

http://www.prodyon.de/files/sonicfire-lies_for_sale.mp3

r_module · Post by **r_module** » Tue Oct 05, 2004 9:48 pm

in case she was bored this song will not change her mind.

Ja.x · Post by **Ja.x** » Tue Oct 05, 2004 10:08 pm

Nice melody, and nice guitar playing (the intro reminds me a fado). But you still have a lot to work with your voice, specially the longer notes; and I don't think this is the right key for you. Try to lower it a bit (two tones, that's how we say it in English?).

A nice moment of soul expression, anyway

knockman · Post by **knockman** » Tue Oct 05, 2004 11:16 pm

this is beautiful!

i don't know the lyrics, but it has a fragility which no doubt comes from your state of heart - it's like a document of your emotion. perhaps if you made any changes it would lose its current 'voice'.

i can't give advice on music production or love...but good luck azra.

regards

azra · Post by **azra** » Wed Oct 06, 2004 12:07 am

Thanks to you all and it means much

As i said to Putte on pm i am a bad guitar player who never sang in his life. My girl just left me few days ago and in that moment, and that was almost my first night whitout her after 4 years.Belive me or not if it means something and if you blame yourself in the middle of the nigh when you play your guitar the word are flowing and the main thing on this tune are words.
I just wanted to check if the music and singing are crap so that she doesnt start loughing if i send her that. I didnt expect so positive reactions.

Think i could translate the song if you would like me to do that,even whit my not so good English but the rimes would be destroyed and the big part of the song would lost its meaning.

And tomorrow is my big day maybe, my last chance to get her back , so the tune will become true or not and wish me that the tune becomes meaningless and I promise you that my second song will be a happy song whit more major scales.
I cant belive this,im writin you all this i i dont know even one of you, so sorry if someone thinks this doesnt belong here end i wish you all the best .

All this reminds me about that 60 es spirit and i think that world need some of that.

PEACE

Putte man , thanks again and i own you one

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Wed Oct 06, 2004 5:06 am

azra wrote:I cant belive this,im writin you all this i i dont know even one of you, so sorry if someone thinks this doesnt belong here end i wish you all the best .

This is what we call the power of KvR, it goes beyond the music and reaches out from person to person.

I could not think of a better person to host this tune

The song; it's beautiful and sincere in its emotive feel. Like a rough uncut diamond that should stay as is for some diamonds are beautiful as they are. Good luck today

azra · Post by **azra** » Wed Oct 06, 2004 7:20 pm

Bad news for me and there is no words to describe my fellings now but...

a little advice to you my friends,take care of what you got because you may start to realise what you had
in the moment you lose it.

I was wrong that a song could change something , it can only help time to run faster.

putte · Post by **putte** » Wed Oct 06, 2004 7:26 pm

so sorry to hear that .. and had the same experience 5 months ago, after having had my girl for 5 years.

azra, if you feel bad and lonely just come here in the following days. be sure to have some open ears, get some hugs and tell the pain. quite some of us do that here, so dont worry about "i dont know these guys" ..

kvr is really fit in "handling" these things, belive me. you cant imagine how much kvr helped me when stepho left me .. and it doesnt matter how much your post count shows.

take care azra,
and you know you´ll get through this time.

what helped me was making a lot of music .. you can still write songs for her, or for you, or about the time the both of you had ..

putte

mckenic · Post by **mckenic** » Wed Oct 06, 2004 7:26 pm

...

azra wrote:I was wrong that a song could change something...

But please understand, it has changed things for us... and also please understand that you are among friends here.

Many of us have been exactly where you are now - there are no magic words to make it better Im afarid but we are here if you need to talk.

Dave

Not a effects topic but....