Show your musical work. Be a man. C'mon! Let's see how you take criticism this way.SAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:31 pmcritical review. okay with you?Etienne1973 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:26 pmFree speech or plain insult?SAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:20 pm I just don't think your songs are that good. The lyrics are trash. The production and arrangements are predictable and uninteresting... the melodies and chord progressions are derivative of better things that have come before.
I have know idea why you have such attitude. You sound like you write knockoffs for local public TV commercials used by brands that have no cash for real background music.
No More Excuses...Please Help A Wannabe Songwriter
- KVRAF
- 2069 posts since 8 Feb, 2013 from Switzerland
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- KVRian
- 868 posts since 18 Sep, 2007
You aren't worth a flame war... I just stopped by to say you are a terrible songwriter and should quit whining. Maybe one of your problems is you have an elitist attitude... It shows in your music. You want to be a part of something so badly you become derivative of it. You lack originality and you have a poor attitude.wagtunes wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:46 pmGuy, you really gotta step up your game. I've been insulted by people a lot smarter than you. And clever stuff too. Your posts are just amateur hour.
I suggest going to school and taking a class in, oh, I don't know...basic English?
Either that or watch some Don Rickles routines. Now HE knew how to insult people.
Doesn't really matter what you think of my English.
Would you like to challenge me to a songwriting contest? Would you like me to embarrass you? I can do that if you want. What you really need is a little bit of humble. I can help you with that.
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- KVRian
- 868 posts since 18 Sep, 2007
I just offered as you typed that.Etienne1973 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:48 pmShow your musical work. Be a man. C'mon! Let's see how you take criticism this way.SAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:31 pmcritical review. okay with you?Etienne1973 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:26 pmFree speech or plain insult?SAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:20 pm I just don't think your songs are that good. The lyrics are trash. The production and arrangements are predictable and uninteresting... the melodies and chord progressions are derivative of better things that have come before.
I have know idea why you have such attitude. You sound like you write knockoffs for local public TV commercials used by brands that have no cash for real background music.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23013 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Hey Vurt, I finished "Still Out Of Sync" so you can listen to it anytime you want. I know you said you were waiting until it was done.
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... ut-of-sync
Saw, you aren't worth anymore of my time either.
Have a nice day.
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... ut-of-sync
Saw, you aren't worth anymore of my time either.
Have a nice day.
- addled muppet weed
- 111302 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
ha!wagtunes wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 8:00 pm Hey Vurt, I finished "Still Out Of Sync" so you can listen to it anytime you want. I know you said you were waiting until it was done.
just posted in your thread.
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
Show them.SAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:51 pmI just offered as you typed that.Etienne1973 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:48 pmShow your musical work. Be a man. C'mon! Let's see how you take criticism this way.SAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:31 pmcritical review. okay with you?Etienne1973 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:26 pmFree speech or plain insult?SAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:20 pm I just don't think your songs are that good. The lyrics are trash. The production and arrangements are predictable and uninteresting... the melodies and chord progressions are derivative of better things that have come before.
I have know idea why you have such attitude. You sound like you write knockoffs for local public TV commercials used by brands that have no cash for real background music.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23013 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Hey DT, you're making me hungry.donkey tugger wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 8:03 pmchops.jpgSAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:51 pmI just offered as you typed that.Etienne1973 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:48 pmShow your musical work. Be a man. C'mon! Let's see how you take criticism this way.SAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:31 pmcritical review. okay with you?Etienne1973 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:26 pmFree speech or plain insult?SAW75 wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 7:20 pm I just don't think your songs are that good. The lyrics are trash. The production and arrangements are predictable and uninteresting... the melodies and chord progressions are derivative of better things that have come before.
I have know idea why you have such attitude. You sound like you write knockoffs for local public TV commercials used by brands that have no cash for real background music.
Show them.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23013 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Hey look man, if you want to have a civil conversation without all the insults, I'm all for it. Are you capable of doing that?
That I'm not the greatest songwriter in the world isn't news to me. But I've heard a lot of music that became popular that, for the life of me, boggles my mind it's so bad. So obviously "quality" is not a requirement to make it in the business.
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- KVRAF
- 1894 posts since 9 Jul, 2014 from UK
Grabs popcorn and kicks back...
I wonder what happens if I press this button...
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
I think the lad's bottled it.
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- KVRian
- 868 posts since 18 Sep, 2007
Such as?wagtunes wrote: Fri Aug 02, 2019 8:10 pm But I've heard a lot of music that became popular that, for the life of me, boggles my mind it's so bad. So obviously "quality" is not a requirement to make it in the business.
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
I'm sure they had a minor disco-house club hit in the late 90s.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 23013 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Way too many to name.