No More Excuses...Please Help A Wannabe Songwriter

[wagtunes]

he can be winner. he needs something positive in his life.

My friend, and I use that term loosely, I have more positive in my life than you could ever imagine. I should let my wife, my kid, my church and the dozens of really good friends I have read your comment. They'd be laughing their asses off.

Maybe you're the one who needs something positive in HIS life.

Have a nice day.

So you are up for the contest then? Specified genre, time constraint? A little fun?

Ready when you are.

And please... with your positive bull... I entered this thread because I thought your attitude and whining was laughable... ignore lists, passive aggressive stances...

My critique was how I felt. And you got offended. Oh well.

Offended? You want me to post some of the stuff that's been said about my music? You don't even make the first cut in offensiveness.

Please point to me in my 15,000 plus posts where I ever said I'm an amazing songwriter and should have a Grammy Award by now.

You make assumptions based on a perception that isn't even close to reality. I am well aware that I am average at best as a songwriter. I am also well aware that talent alone doesn't equate to success in this business.

So what exactly is the lesson that you're trying to teach me that I already don't know?

[SAW75]

you shouldn't give in to fear based responses

what am I afraid of?

[vurt]

you shouldn't give in to fear based responses

what am I afraid of?

only you can know the true answer to this

[SAW75]

So what exactly is the lesson that you're trying to teach me that I already don't know?

no lesson. I think your music is not good. I thought your attitude was, let's just say, strange at best... towards some other posts.

I thought, my god, these lyrics are bologna

I thought, my god, this guy is ripping off so many other tunes... why does he think he should be successful... it's all second hand...

I though he really doesn't listen to enough music and he might be stuck in a world from 40 years ago...

I thought... this is all dull

so I thought i'd post.

I have nothing to teach you. and wasn't trying to give you the worst review you've ever had... I personally just thought your music was that bad...

except your voice is kinda interesting... kinda in that luke haines way... if you had any balls to use it.

and I think I don't play with cult members. and that is really how I feel. your cult might be your number one problem... but who am I... just sayin'

[SAW75]

you shouldn't give in to fear based responses

what am I afraid of?

only you can know the true answer to this

well not you or this thread, vurt.

[el-bo (formerly ebow)]

in other words... blow me.

[ramseysounds]

Need. More. Popcorn.

[donkey tugger]

It's a more ignominious retreat than Napoleon's from Moscow.

[vurt]

you shouldn't give in to fear based responses

what am I afraid of?

only you can know the true answer to this

well not you or this thread, vurt.

id hope not, im in no way frightening

[vurt]

It's a more ignominious retreat than Napoleon's from Moscow.

[wagtunes]

So what exactly is the lesson that you're trying to teach me that I already don't know?

no lesson. I think your music is not good. I thought your attitude was, let's just say, strange at best... towards some other posts.

I thought, my god, these lyrics are bologna

I thought, my god, this guy is ripping off so many other tunes... why does he think he should be successful... it's all second hand...

I though he really doesn't listen to enough music and he might be stuck in a world from 40 years ago...

I thought... this is all dull

so I thought i'd post.

I have nothing to teach you. and wasn't trying to give you the worst review you've ever had... I personally just thought your music was that bad...

except your voice is kinda interesting... kinda in that luke haines way... if you had any balls to use it.

and I think I don't play with cult members. and that is really how I feel. your cult might be your number one problem... but who am I... just sayin'

Cool, so maybe then you're done here? Or is there something else you'd like to say to me?

I have to admit, given how bad my music is in your eyes, I'm curious to hear anything that you've done that's so vastly better. I know you're not interested in posting anything here and since you have nothing up on Soundcloud or anywhere else, one has to wonder.

Anyway, if you're done with me, that's cool. If you want to continue this conversation, that's cool too.

Here's what I won't do. I won't get sucked into the trap of name calling and the same old garbage that I used to allow myself to get sucked into. You've said your peace and you're entitled to your opinion. I hold no ill will towards you for that opinion.

But I gotta tell you, if my music sucks that badly, how in God's name did you ever force yourself to listen to so much of it? Bored?

[vurt]

ok, some suspect lyrics

in the rolf track.

[el-bo (formerly ebow)]

ok, some suspect lyrics

in the rolf track.

You don't say

[wagtunes]

You know what? Just for fun, let's take a poll. Who else here thinks my music sucks?

[Hink]

and I think I don't play with cult members. and that is really how I feel. your cult might be your number one problem... but who am I... just sayin'

and ftr strictly hpc material