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jethrobull
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1916 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK

Post Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:32 pm

Last edited by jethrobull on Sat Dec 07, 2019 12:43 am, edited 1 time in total.
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vurt
addled muppet weed
58958 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass

Re: Replicate

Post Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:38 pm

i like it!
very dystopian future 8)
nice rhythm, works with the intermittent glitchys :D :tu:

on my phone so mix cannot really be commented on, no stereo and no bass :lol: (on the phone, track could be full of it for all i can hear)

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jethrobull
KVRAF
1916 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK

Re: Replicate

Post Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:48 pm

vurt wrote: ↑
Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:38 pm
i like it!
very dystopian future 8)
nice rhythm, works with the intermittent glitchys :D :tu:

on my phone so mix cannot really be commented on, no stereo and no bass :lol: (on the phone, track could be full of it for all i can hear)
Why, thank you Sir! Much appreciated :tu:
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experimental.crow
KVRAF
6165 posts since 9 Mar, 2003 from the bridge of sighs

Re: Replicate

Post Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:51 pm

checks all the boxes ...
my favorite of yours i've listened to ...
well produced and well played , w/ an effective build upon the main theme ...
:tu:
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thecontrolcentre
KVRAF
26037 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny

Re: Replicate

Post Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:58 pm

Nice one Jethro ... very dark and bombastic. Kick has a lovely thump to it without overpowering the track. Great job :)

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jethrobull
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1916 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK

Re: Replicate

Post Fri Dec 06, 2019 3:03 pm

experimental.crow wrote: ↑
Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:51 pm
checks all the boxes ...
my favorite of yours i've listened to ...
well produced and well played , w/ an effective build upon the main theme ...
:tu:
Thank you for the listen and the kind words.
Glad you like it :)
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jethrobull
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1916 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK

Re: Replicate

Post Fri Dec 06, 2019 3:08 pm

thecontrolcentre wrote: ↑
Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:58 pm
Nice one Jethro ... very dark and bombastic. Kick has a lovely thump to it without overpowering the track. Great job :)
And nice one for the listen and the positive feedback. Really appreciate it, thanks! :tu:
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vurt
addled muppet weed
58958 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass

Re: Replicate

Post Fri Dec 06, 2019 3:19 pm

jethrobull wrote: ↑
Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:48 pm
vurt wrote: ↑
Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:38 pm
i like it!
very dystopian future 8)
nice rhythm, works with the intermittent glitchys :D :tu:

on my phone so mix cannot really be commented on, no stereo and no bass :lol: (on the phone, track could be full of it for all i can hear)
Why, thank you Sir! Much appreciated :tu:
no problem, thanks for sharing.
ill have a proper listen tomorrow now the cats allowing me in to the studio :hihi:

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htcnext2
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375 posts since 3 Jul, 2017 from Austria

Re: Replicate

Post Sat Dec 07, 2019 3:24 am

Nice choice of sounds and sounddesign. The track comes in well with the evolving string passages. Also the rhythm I like. Good job!

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BONES
GRRRRRRR!
9462 posts since 14 Jun, 2001 from Somewhere else, on principle

Re: Replicate

Post Sat Dec 07, 2019 5:59 am

I think the drums are far too busy and too brittle sounding (too much top end). They don't suit the rest of what's going on at all, or maybe they are too prominent in the mix (or both). The rest of it sounds great, though (otherwise I wouldn't have bothered commenting at all).
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jethrobull
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1916 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK

Re: Replicate

Post Sat Dec 07, 2019 6:42 am

htcnext2 wrote: ↑
Sat Dec 07, 2019 3:24 am
Nice choice of sounds and sounddesign. The track comes in well with the evolving string passages. Also the rhythm I like. Good job!
Thank you very much. I appreciate the kind words :tu:
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jethrobull
KVRAF
1916 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK

Re: Replicate

Post Sat Dec 07, 2019 6:47 am

BONES wrote: ↑
Sat Dec 07, 2019 5:59 am
I think the drums are far too busy and too brittle sounding (too much top end). They don't suit the rest of what's going on at all, or maybe they are too prominent in the mix (or both). The rest of it sounds great, though (otherwise I wouldn't have bothered commenting at all).
Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment, I appreciate it! :tu:
Yeah, the drums are intentionally upfront but maybe too much? Will shave some top end off them and see if that helps.
Glad you enjoyed the rest, thanks for the feedback.
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donkey tugger
Boss Lovin' DR
6579 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire

Re: Replicate

Post Mon Dec 09, 2019 7:14 am

Another good un. Definitely got that early New Order thing (not so much the sounds etc, which are more contemporary, but the chords etc) again, which is a good thing!

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thejonsolo
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2469 posts since 13 Apr, 2008 from Charleston, SC

Re: Replicate

Post Mon Dec 09, 2019 6:12 pm

Early in the track, I would have said what BONES said about the percussion. At about halfway through I got it in a different way, and loved it. Then when they dropped, I just missed them.

Overall great mood and feel to this track. Rich sounds give a solid bed. I loved some of the trailing effects at certain points in the percussion, and almost wished those effects came back in as their own synth-y percussion-y thing.

Nothing to really change. Good job.

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Forgotten
KVRAF
8590 posts since 15 Apr, 2019 from Nowhere

Re: Replicate

Post Mon Dec 09, 2019 6:40 pm

Develops nicely over the course of the piece, and the sounds are well chosen. The ending without the percussion was a nice touch, and I thought that section could have been longer.

Made me think it could have been part of a movie soundtrack, maybe as vurt said, something of a dystopian nature.

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