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LoveEnigma18 · Post by **LoveEnigma18** » Sat Jan 04, 2020 11:30 am

I have written my first vocal song, lyrics in English. While I have had my complete education in English medium and I consider my English pretty good, English is not my mother tongue. So, it makes sense to review it once at least.

I am looking for a personal help from someone here whom I can trust enough to help me conclude the lyrics of my song. The lyrics are basically completed, but I need help to review it from word choices point of view and any other general improvements that can make it overall better.

Two things:
1. I will not take too much time of yours. I understand we all are busy with so many things.
2. If we modify the lyrics considerably, I will credit your name alongside mine where applicable (like on music distribution services that have the option, Bandcamp, SoundCloud, social media, etc.). Also, through word of mouth to anyone I talk to. Of course, it all depends on your wish.

I am kinda shy to post the lyrics in public and want to keep them secret, obviously, so I would appreciate communication via PM. Please let me know by commenting here and I will get in touch with you.

Thank you in advance.

dark water · Post by **dark water** » Sat Jan 04, 2020 1:01 pm

Hi.
PM sent.

harryupbabble · Post by **harryupbabble** » Sat Jan 04, 2020 5:12 pm

why not paste your lyrics into google translator and call your band the google translateds?

i'm just jokin', man. i'm also in your shoes.
see? bad use of english phrase right there.

i want to use "i'm also in your knickers". more british. okay maybe not.

also, it seems those swedish bands had no accent at all. it's a mystery.

what accent is microsoft sam using?

LoveEnigma18 · Post by **LoveEnigma18** » Sat Jan 04, 2020 5:48 pm

harryupbabble wrote: Sat Jan 04, 2020 5:12 pm why not paste your lyrics into google translator and call your band the google translateds?

i'm just jokin', man. i'm also in your shoes.
see? bad use of english phrase right there.

i want to use "i'm also in your knickers". more british. okay maybe not.

also, it seems those swedish bands had no accent at all. it's a mystery.

what accent is microsoft sam using?

No worries, that was funny.

LoveEnigma18 · Post by **LoveEnigma18** » Sat Jan 04, 2020 5:49 pm

dark water wrote: Sat Jan 04, 2020 1:01 pm Hi.
PM sent.

Thank you to dark water for his review and comments. I really appreciate it.

I also received some good suggestions from NTO, which is much appreciated.

Thanks guys.

Need a personal help with lyrics I have written for a song...