KVR Audio

Kim Lajoie · Post by **Kim Lajoie** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 9:39 am

Check it out:

http://s94949173.onlinehome.us/kim/CosILikeU.mp3

Forever,

Kim.

mmdejonge · Post by **mmdejonge** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 4:32 pm

I like it too

Cheerful and uplifting, nicely put together and an enjoyable listen as well! Bubblegum pop is usually not my cup of tea, but I think you've done a very great job with this - it feels very pro and polished. Thanks for sharing.

JustJ · Post by **JustJ** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 4:42 pm

Nice, really nice.
TheStart is Amazing the voice should not be so Lo-Fi ed.
The Scratch is verry good, but I would not mute the other voices while the Voice Part at 0:15.
But neverless realy good

sailorboy · Post by **sailorboy** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 8:19 pm

i all have to say, I LOVE THIS TUNE

very good production, nice voices , i'd love to have this girl in one of my tunes, very fresh. you did it jeez!!!

garret · Post by **garret** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 8:29 pm

Good stuff.

It's very hooky, and the production is terrific. I love the stops and starts... I swear I hear you adding and dropping beats during the breaks, though you might just be faking it... whatever you're doing, it sounds surprising and fun.

The lyrics are a bit simple/repetitive for my tastes, but then again I don't think I'm the target audience for bubblegum pop.

mmdejonge · Post by **mmdejonge** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 8:32 pm

I've mentioned this already, but somehow I feel a need to express myself again:

I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE!!! (sorry for shouting)

(maybe I'm into bubblegum pop after all)

griels · Post by **griels** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 9:20 pm

Very cool... The changes are a little stilted in places but in general you pull it off very well

Production is extremely good, although I'm not that keen on the snare sound - too harsh for the busy breakbeatish stuff you're doing with it alongside the vocals... On the whole excellent work.

ebinary · Post by **ebinary** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 9:47 pm

Jeez wrote:Check it out:

Really like it ... production great. Song: interesting (for a while).

critique: ... needs more verses or at least a multline chorus. The one line chorus gets tiresome after 50 repeats. The only effect I could live without is the heavy vocal decimation (the lighter ones are cool - the heavy one seems like its trying too hard).

Eric

Kim Lajoie · Post by **Kim Lajoie** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 11:57 pm

Wow thanks for listening! I was thinking I wouldn't get much of a response here, this forum's not big on "commercial" music styles.

Forever,

Kim.

Kim Lajoie · Post by **Kim Lajoie** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 12:00 am

sailorboy wrote:i all have to say, I LOVE THIS TUNE
very good production, nice voices , i'd love to have this girl in one of my tunes, very fresh. you did it jeez!!!

The singer is my 16yo sister, and vocal performance is terrible!

Forever,

Kim.

Kim Lajoie · Post by **Kim Lajoie** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 12:02 am

garret wrote:I swear I hear you adding and dropping beats during the breaks, though you might just be faking it... whatever you're doing, it sounds surprising and fun.

What do you mean?

garret wrote:The lyrics are a bit simple/repetitive for my tastes, but then again I don't think I'm the target audience for bubblegum pop.

The singer (my sister) wrote most of the lyrics. I agree - simple is an understatement.

Forever,

Kim.

Kim Lajoie · Post by **Kim Lajoie** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 12:05 am

ebinary wrote:
Jeez wrote:Check it out:
Really like it ... production great. Song: interesting (for a while).

critique: ... needs more verses or at least a multline chorus. The one line chorus gets tiresome after 50 repeats.

Yeah, I know. The song is built from a session of my sister and I just fooling about, so I had limited material to work with... and I couldn't be bothered busting out the resynthesis.

ebinary wrote:The only effect I could live without is the heavy vocal decimation (the lighter ones are cool - the heavy one seems like its trying too hard).

When in the song are you talking about?

Forever,

Kim.

ebinary · Post by **ebinary** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 12:38 am

[quote="Jeez
When in the song are you talking about?
Kim.[/quote]

2:26, and maybe one other spot: Ala - The Matrix

crh9261964 · Post by **crh9261964** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 1:03 am

I hear a southern accent in there.......

Good music......Good stuff I just made a post in here too. I got a questiion....what effect are you using on the vocals to get that "robot" sound fast repetitive sound....like trent reznor used in Starf&*()ers

Thanks

xoxos · Post by **xoxos** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 2:03 am

how come your sister gets such a bad rap? finally, an honest vocal.. seemed kinda intentional, eg. going straight to "the way you smell" and all. don't you like her?

delightful. the lead seemed a bit muffled, and the one resonant bass note i think combined to give me a muffly impression, but i'm being picky, and i mix all top anyway.

[Bubblegum pop] Cos I Like U