KVR Audio

Karma_tba · Post by **Karma_tba** » Mon Sep 21, 2020 5:13 pm

The asses U kick on the way up...U gotta kiss on the way down.
https://soundcloud.com/karma_tba/mixdown-1

thomekk · Post by **thomekk** » Mon Sep 21, 2020 10:28 pm

I liked this. And especially the timbre of your vocals. The whole track with its melancholly vibe works really well.
Also the lyrics make something for the listener - we don't know what was behind, but can grab the sorrow.

Thanks for posting this

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Tue Sep 22, 2020 12:42 am

This is really good, one of your best ones.
Minimalistic, voice fits really well. Nice one.

Karma_tba · Post by **Karma_tba** » Tue Sep 22, 2020 1:23 am

Thanks thomekk and Bandsaw...

revvy · Post by **revvy** » Tue Sep 22, 2020 7:12 am

Very rare for me to stay with a tune posted in Music Cafe til the end which is why I seldom post here. This track kept my attention all the way through, nice work.

Karma_tba · Post by **Karma_tba** » Tue Sep 22, 2020 12:59 pm

revvy wrote: ↑Tue Sep 22, 2020 7:12 am Very rare for me to stay with a tune posted in Music Cafe til the end which is why I seldom post here. This track kept my attention all the way through, nice work.

Thanks.

AsPeeXXXVIII · Post by **AsPeeXXXVIII** » Tue Sep 22, 2020 2:19 pm

I've gotta admit, for the song being well over 4 minutes long, I expected some more development. As it is, it's essentially the same phrase 5 or 6 times, which doesn't really serve it very well in my opinion. It could've ended at 2 minutes and it wouldn't have felt nearly as monotonous as it is in this state. Better yet, a second part with a different chord progression or vocal melody would definitely have been appreciated on my part.

That aside, I quite enjoyed this. And you have a cool voice. c:

Karma_tba · Post by **Karma_tba** » Tue Sep 22, 2020 7:01 pm

AsPeeXXXVIII wrote: ↑Tue Sep 22, 2020 2:19 pm I've gotta admit, for the song being well over 4 minutes long, I expected some more development. As it is, it's essentially the same phrase 5 or 6 times, which doesn't really serve it very well in my opinion. It could've ended at 2 minutes and it wouldn't have felt nearly as monotonous as it is in this state. Better yet, a second part with a different chord progression or vocal melody would definitely have been appreciated on my part.

That aside, I quite enjoyed this. And you have a cool voice. c:

Thanks for listening...and for the helpful and constructive input. BTW you write a nice review...A honest critique, but with useable tips, and just enough encouragement. It not easy to be critical without offending the touchy Artist!

vurt · Post by **vurt** » Tue Sep 22, 2020 8:46 pm

nice work.
you seem to be more singing than rapping as im used to. gave it a more soulful sound imo

Second Skin · Post by **Second Skin** » Tue Sep 22, 2020 9:12 pm

Kvr track of the week in my opinion.
A couple of questionable guitar notes

Very well done Karma.

Karma_tba · Post by **Karma_tba** » Wed Sep 23, 2020 2:11 pm

Thanks to vurt, and Second Skin!!

AsPeeXXXVIII · Post by **AsPeeXXXVIII** » Wed Sep 23, 2020 3:10 pm

Karma_tba wrote: ↑Tue Sep 22, 2020 7:01 pm Thanks for listening...and for the helpful and constructive input. BTW you write a nice review...A honest critique, but with useable tips, and just enough encouragement.

That's generally what I strive for with my feedback. I'm glad you didn't take it the wrong way.

U Made Your Bed