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Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:19 pm
wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 5:16 pm
Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 4:29 pm So Layser, you thought it would be clever to point everyone to my link by editing your post..
This is seriously immature.
Re edit your post.
What is your problem? He removed the link.
Yes he removed the link but he is pointing people towards my link in my signiture to continue his Immature behaviour.
So you don't want people to see the link in your signature? You don't want people to listen to your music? Are you ashamed of your music?

THEN REMOVE THE DAMN LINK IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!!

Sheesh.

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wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:32 pm
Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:19 pm
wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 5:16 pm
Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 4:29 pm So Layser, you thought it would be clever to point everyone to my link by editing your post..
This is seriously immature.
Re edit your post.
What is your problem? He removed the link.
Yes he removed the link but he is pointing people towards my link in my signiture to continue his Immature behaviour.
So you don't want people to see the link in your signature? You don't want people to listen to your music? Are you ashamed of your music?

THEN REMOVE THE DAMN LINK IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!!

Sheesh.
So I have to remove my link because I'm being bullied?
I want people to listen to my music because they want to, not because some immature idiot (Layser) is using it to make his pathetic point across. How can one agree to that!?

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Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:36 pm
wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:32 pm
Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:19 pm
wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 5:16 pm
Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 4:29 pm So Layser, you thought it would be clever to point everyone to my link by editing your post..
This is seriously immature.
Re edit your post.
What is your problem? He removed the link.
Yes he removed the link but he is pointing people towards my link in my signiture to continue his Immature behaviour.
So you don't want people to see the link in your signature? You don't want people to listen to your music? Are you ashamed of your music?

THEN REMOVE THE DAMN LINK IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!!

Sheesh.
So I have to remove my link because I'm being bullied?
I want people to listen to my music because they want to, not because some immature idiot (Layser) is using it to make his pathetic point across. How can one agree to that!?
You know what? I wish somebody here would post a link to my music for whatever reason, even if they say "Listen to this crap" because I know it's not crap and I'm not ashamed of it.

You can't be bullied if the music in question is good.

Imagine if somebody posted "Listen to this crap" and linked to music by Bach. They'd be laughed off the planet.

Now guess what? I'm going to listen to your music. Not because Layzer said what he said but because I'm curious. If you don't want my honest opinion of it, tell me now and I'll keep my mouth shut.

But really man, you need to grow a thicker skin because this is just ridiculous.

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Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:36 pm
wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:32 pm
Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:19 pm
wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 5:16 pm
Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 4:29 pm So Layser, you thought it would be clever to point everyone to my link by editing your post..
This is seriously immature.
Re edit your post.
What is your problem? He removed the link.
Yes he removed the link but he is pointing people towards my link in my signiture to continue his Immature behaviour.
So you don't want people to see the link in your signature? You don't want people to listen to your music? Are you ashamed of your music?

THEN REMOVE THE DAMN LINK IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!!

Sheesh.
So I have to remove my link because I'm being bullied?
I want people to listen to my music because they want to, not because some immature idiot (Layser) is using it to make his pathetic point across. How can one agree to that!?
Know what? I listened to Masquerade. Your music suffers from the same malady as most of the stuff posted here. The mix is great. Loved it. The instrumentation was pretty cool too and liked the way you had instruments coming in and dropping out. All good.

But there's no melody. Either that or it's those same notes over and over and over. It wouldn't even make a good backing track because the structure is static. Where's the bridge? Where's something that hints to verse/chorus form?

In short, it's monotonous. But like I said, most stuff posted here is like this because people don't know how to write melodies because, ultimately, they're not songwriters.

They know how to mix and arrange and put chords together. That's it. And that by itself doesn't make a song.

Have I heard worse? Much worse. But this song is obviously somebody who knows music theory as much as I know what you had for breakfast today.

Seriously, write a melody. Then write a B section with a different melody. I know it's a lost art but if you try I bet you can do it.

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Welcome to the Masqureade is a Prelude. It's an intro track. It doesn't have verses and choruses.

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Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 7:23 pm Welcome to the Masqureade is a Prelude. It's an intro track. It doesn't have verses and choruses.
Then it's too damn long as an intro. You exhausted the theme a minute in.

Also, where is the rest? Intro to what? If people listen to things and you don't provide context, how are they supposed to know?

The song after, that's a minute long. I take it that's not a complete song either.

So do you have any complete songs that I can listen to or are these two songs it?

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I don't really want to even discuss my music on this thread. It's not about that. It's about the bullying.

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Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 7:28 pm I don't really want to even discuss my music on this thread. It's not about that. It's about the bullying.
I guess you have to have music to discuss. Hey, feel free to stop by my thread any time and tear my stuff apart. I welcome the comments.

Have a nice day.

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wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 7:30 pm
I guess you have to have music to discuss.
That was a cheap and somewhat unnecessary shot.
The irony is I came here to get away from the bickering on another board, figured the Music Cafe would be safe for 5 minutes :)
At least I learned something in this thread, I never knew what a Prelude was, I figured it was some sort of opening but never looked into to it before.

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Second Skin wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 7:41 pm
wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 7:30 pm
I guess you have to have music to discuss.
That was a cheap and somewhat unnecessary shot.
The irony is I came here to get away from the bickering on another board, figured the Music Cafe would be safe for 5 minutes :)
At least I learned something in this thread, I never knew what a Prelude was, I figured it was some sort of opening but never looked into to it before.
Look, the guy came here and took a shot at Layzer's music so Layzer fired back and the guy took offense. So he can dish it out but he can't take it. So I simply told the guy, if you don't want people seeing your link, remove it from your signature.

How hard is that?

When somebody lives in glass houses they shouldn't throw stones. If I take a shot at somebody's music, I am fully prepared to take my shot back. This whole "He bullied me" crap is kindergarten stuff.

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So you think you can throw your weight around wagtunes?
Get you facts straight.
Your just here to add fuel to the fire. I hear you re pretty good at that.

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Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 7:53 pm So you think you can throw your weight around wagtunes?
Get you facts straight.
Your just here to add fuel to the fire. I hear you re pretty good at that.
Unless the posts have been deleted or edited, it's all there for people to read. My facts are straight.

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Mikelo wrote: Tue Sep 29, 2020 9:45 am Sorry, but found the whole thing repetitive and quite frankly, dull being it one synth or a hundred used.
Here it is. This was your comment on Layzer's song.

My facts are straight.

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wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 8:00 pm
Mikelo wrote: Tue Sep 29, 2020 9:45 am Sorry, but found the whole thing repetitive and quite frankly, dull being it one synth or a hundred used.
Here it is. This was your comment on Layzer's song.

My facts are straight.
And that was my opinion.
Did I swear or make it personal? No.
But it's OK if you do it then eh?
Like I give a damn about your opinions.
Again, you are just here to stir it up.

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Mikelo wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 8:09 pm
wagtunes wrote: Wed Sep 30, 2020 8:00 pm
Mikelo wrote: Tue Sep 29, 2020 9:45 am Sorry, but found the whole thing repetitive and quite frankly, dull being it one synth or a hundred used.
Here it is. This was your comment on Layzer's song.

My facts are straight.
And that was my opinion.
Did I swear or make it personal? No.
But it's OK if you do it then eh?
Like I give a damn about your opinions.
Again, you are just here to stir it up.
When you criticize someone's music, you make it personal. Do I need to quote his response? What he said wasn't so horrible. And demanding he remove your link is just childish.

But i guess that's okay too.

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