Here's a demo of a track I'm working on.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14179747
Comments welcome.
Thanks,
Michael.
Toxic Garden - Promise Breaker (Demo)
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- KVRAF
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- 1819 posts since 10 Mar, 2004
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aaron aardvark aaron aardvark https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=248508
- KVRAF
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Mikelo,
Thank you for the review! Now your song: Wow, she has a beautiful voice! Very nice melodies too! Gave me goosebumps. Piano is very nice too. I'm usually not into songs this mellow, but this is fantastic so far. OK, now it is getting a rock vibe. Now back to mellow. Then the fade out. Any chance the singer could put grit in her vocals during the rock part, if you put vocals in there? Keep working on this man, it does seem unfinished, but most of it is really good!
Thank you for the review! Now your song: Wow, she has a beautiful voice! Very nice melodies too! Gave me goosebumps. Piano is very nice too. I'm usually not into songs this mellow, but this is fantastic so far. OK, now it is getting a rock vibe. Now back to mellow. Then the fade out. Any chance the singer could put grit in her vocals during the rock part, if you put vocals in there? Keep working on this man, it does seem unfinished, but most of it is really good!
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
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- KVRAF
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- 1819 posts since 10 Mar, 2004
Hi Aaron thanks for listening and the feedback.
Yes, there is more to the vocals, the rock ending will carry the second half of the chorus to finish (more strained singing) . There's also harmonies in the chorus, which for some reason I omitted from this version.
Due to the current pandemic situation, the current vocals were recorded straight to her laptop microphone and passed on to me.
Thanks again for listening Aaron.
Regards,
Michael.
Yes, there is more to the vocals, the rock ending will carry the second half of the chorus to finish (more strained singing) . There's also harmonies in the chorus, which for some reason I omitted from this version.
Due to the current pandemic situation, the current vocals were recorded straight to her laptop microphone and passed on to me.
Thanks again for listening Aaron.
Regards,
Michael.
