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Webothwin · Post by **Webothwin** » Wed Jan 20, 2021 11:03 am

https://soundcloud.com/thealterednative ... -the-favor

Workout music:
https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/smack

https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/all-night-long

https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/game-over

Any feedback is welcomed,
Thank you,
Tracy

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Fri Jan 22, 2021 4:11 am

Webothwin,
Thank you for the review! Now your song "Smack": danceable. Yes, you could work out to this. Sounds slightly menacing, which is fine by me. Drums could be louder, or have more punch; some compression could help. Some pretty cool synths. A little repetitive, though I suppose that works for workout music. What state or country are you from? The song has a European vibe for me.

Webothwin · Post by **Webothwin** » Fri Jan 22, 2021 4:17 am

Thank you for checking it out. I am in America and while it is already released your advise certainly helps me out a lot. Thank you for the feedback! I will seek critique before I release next time.
Tracy

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Sat Jan 23, 2021 2:56 am

First two were very driven and powerful and had a certain appeal, but for me really crowded in the mid range. Being heavy in the mid range can be OK for short times here and there, but having 4 minutes of it can be fatiguing.
Sometimes "less is more".

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Sat Jan 23, 2021 4:42 am

Bansaw wrote: ↑Sat Jan 23, 2021 2:56 am Being heavy in the mid range can be OK for short times here and there, but having 4 minutes of it can be fatiguing.
Sometimes "less is more".

all the tracks lack dynamic range, they are quite squashed, that IMO
is what makes a track "fatiging" combine that with instruments not taking turns (crowding) AND lots of repetition and it can force an early break from listening.

Webothwin · Post by **Webothwin** » Sat Jan 23, 2021 2:31 pm

I really appreciate the criticism as I am always trying to improve. Your comments will definitely help me make better choices!

Webothwin · Post by **Webothwin** » Thu Feb 04, 2021 2:55 pm

Any critique appreciated:

https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/never-again

Webothwin · Post by **Webothwin** » Thu Feb 11, 2021 12:02 am

Any critique appreciated:
https://soundcloud.com/thealterednative ... e-here-now
Thank you,
Tracy

Game Over