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aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Thu Apr 22, 2021 4:56 am

I put two songs in my music website: "Think About It Tomorrow" is the song on top, and "What Are You Asking" (punkish) is the next song down. Please tell me how you like the music and how it can be improved, and I will return the favor. Here is my link:

https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... t=overview

ChameleonMusic · Post by **ChameleonMusic** » Thu Apr 22, 2021 10:38 am

"Think About It Tomorrow"
Nice, bouncy opening riff...drives it all forward...love the counter theme as well...quite thriller film /cinematic!

Vocals - very Alice Cooper for me!

Quite a hybrid style, but it all hangs together well!

"What Are You Asking"

Bit more 'rough and ready' this one without a doubt...definitely 'punk' area!

Hits you between the eyes from the start and keeps going!

Great raw-edged punk vibe - good stuff! Quite authentic as such...I was around during the first wave in the mid 70s!

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Thu Apr 22, 2021 11:32 am

CM,
Thank you for listening & commenting, I appreciate it!

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Fri Apr 23, 2021 3:39 pm

Finally got around to these. It's my once a month treat when you post your stuff.

Think About It Tomorrow - Shades of Bowie, Ian Hunter and yeah, even Alice Cooper. Very catchy riff you got going there. Love the synth work. Well mixed with the caveat that I still think the drums can come up a notch. Just a notch.

What Are You Asking - Drums are much better on this one. Love the guitar work. Two very different songs here. Vocals really loud on this one. Is that you singing? Vocal sounds a little different from your usual. That's why I'm asking. Anyway, well done.

I think of the two, Tomorrow is my favorite.

Don't have anything new. Expect to finish the CD I'm working on sometime in July or August. I'll take a rain check on it.

htcnext2 · Post by **htcnext2** » Fri Apr 23, 2021 4:00 pm

Some influences from 70's Rock may not be denied, but also loads of 80's reminiscences. Not bad! Nice work.

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Sat Apr 24, 2021 6:30 am

wagtunes,
Thank you for listening and replying, I appreciate it! Yes, I did all of the vocals in both songs.

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Sat Apr 24, 2021 7:10 am

htcnext2,
Thank you for listening and commenting, I appreciate it!

Astralboat · Post by **Astralboat** » Tue Apr 27, 2021 6:08 pm

These are cool songs man! I love the synths in Think About Tomorrow. I do think some of the levels of the instruments could go up a notch(especially the drums). Between the two I think I like What You Are Asking a bit better, the vocal levels are a little better on Asking. Really like the punk influence. Good guitar work on both.

Please check out this song: viewtopic.php?f=14&t=564429

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Wed Apr 28, 2021 7:04 am

Astralboat,
Thank you for checking out my music and replying, I appreciate it!

tomtom1 · Post by **tomtom1** » Wed Apr 28, 2021 12:30 pm

aaron aardvark wrote: ↑Thu Apr 22, 2021 4:56 am I put two songs in my music website: "Think About It Tomorrow" is the song on top, and "What Are You Asking" (punkish) is the next song down. Please tell me how you like the music and how it can be improved, and I will return the favor. Here is my link:

https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... t=overview

hi aaron,
really interesting music. not the kind of music I usually hear, so it's a little difficult to say anything substantial.

tomorrow: I really like the synth stuff and the melodies. I would agree with the others who say the drums are bit too quiet. at least that's how it works here on my speakers.

what: i like the instrumental things. the drums could be a bit more dominant for my taste (especially the high ones). maybe a few more rides and cymbals? but i don't know if that would be part of the style.

overall i like "tomorrow" more. but probably also because it is closer to my own music and what I like.

you have already replied to "vulcan". if you have time and desire, i would be happy if you listen to "better days". has already slipped through on the second page. whether you notice anything negatively on your speakers. a bit too loud / quiet ...

] Peter:H [ · Post by **] Peter:H [** » Thu Apr 29, 2021 6:47 pm

Think About It Tomorrow:
Top, man. As always. I love your unique style. I think "aaron aardvark" is kind of a trade mark for unique style. I like the arangement, the mix, staging, width, the good combination of synth sounds and "traditional" instruments. Only the synth line towards the end seems a bit to loud ... and hm ... is it adding to the song. Nevertheless I enjoyed listening

What Are You Asking:
You are punk! Nice energetic track... me going pogo! Great energy! Probabaly the bass could be a bit more prominent to add even more energy/drive to this track!

Overall well done! Cheers!

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Fri Apr 30, 2021 5:53 am

] Peter:H [,
Thank you you for listening to my songs and commenting, I appreciate it!

Music to review (will return the favor) as of April 21st!