Personally, I think the ending is fine (82.7). It's reasonably dramatic melodically, but not jarring in any way.eassae wrote: Mon Jan 31, 2022 2:08 am Thanks seismic! Yeah this was a bit of a departure from the stuff I've been doing lately, also not having the drums was really unusual for me. I guess I needed a change…maybe just for a track, but who knows. The ending was/is killing me on this, I rewrote it probably 10 times, and I'm still not sure if it's completely integrated. My favorite part is the first 32 bars, I'm glad you noticed that section as well.
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Thanks seismic1seismic1 wrote: Thu Feb 03, 2022 12:22 am Personally, I think the ending is fine (82.7). It's reasonably dramatic melodically, but not jarring in any way.
I'm 98% fine with it now. I think I had just reworked it too many times to be objective. I needed a few days distance.
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I usually leave a week before regarding a composition as 'fixed'eassae wrote: Thu Feb 03, 2022 1:10 amThanks seismic1seismic1 wrote: Thu Feb 03, 2022 12:22 am Personally, I think the ending is fine (82.7). It's reasonably dramatic melodically, but not jarring in any way.
I'm 98% fine with it now. I think I had just reworked it too many times to be objective. I needed a few days distance.
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently no longer an 'elderly', now a 'senior'! Is that promotion?
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That's a good rule of thumbfolderol wrote: Thu Feb 03, 2022 9:27 am I usually leave a week before regarding a composition as 'fixed'
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I'm currently averaging 7 yearsfolderol wrote: Thu Feb 03, 2022 9:27 amI usually leave a week before regarding a composition as 'fixed'eassae wrote: Thu Feb 03, 2022 1:10 amThanks seismic1seismic1 wrote: Thu Feb 03, 2022 12:22 am Personally, I think the ending is fine (82.7). It's reasonably dramatic melodically, but not jarring in any way.
I'm 98% fine with it now. I think I had just reworked it too many times to be objective. I needed a few days distance.
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When the data is corrupt in the Desert of the Real, Beyond the Last Thought, where intuition reigns, is the solace that will embolden and strengthen the soul, giving hope once more to this age of failing technique. eassae.com
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Weeeeellll,
The absolute record for me is:
1963 for first concept (but no recording capability).
1985 for first actual recording.
2014 latest revision.
Blurb:
Inspired in the early 1960s by a model ship in full sail made entirely from blown and drawn glass.
'tis this one:
http://www.musically.me.uk/music/The_Crystal_Ship.ogg
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Worth the wait
When the data is corrupt in the Desert of the Real, Beyond the Last Thought, where intuition reigns, is the solace that will embolden and strengthen the soul, giving hope once more to this age of failing technique. eassae.com
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Thanks.
Oh, and apologies for muscling in on your thread
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No problem. All and everything are welcome in my threads.
When the data is corrupt in the Desert of the Real, Beyond the Last Thought, where intuition reigns, is the solace that will embolden and strengthen the soul, giving hope once more to this age of failing technique. eassae.com