Couple of Miniatures
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ChameleonMusic ChameleonMusic https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=430348
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- 1611 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK
Two short pieces that very much focus on ongoing movement - trying to get very subtle ebb and flow into the sustained sounds in particular...an attempt, I suppose, to lose a little bit of that sometimes all to perfect 'sample library' tone quality?
Hopefully nothing sounds too static despite the relatively simple nature of the musical content?
https://soundcloud.com/chameleon-music/ ... in-between
https://soundcloud.com/chameleon-music/ ... old-friend
Hopefully nothing sounds too static despite the relatively simple nature of the musical content?
https://soundcloud.com/chameleon-music/ ... in-between
https://soundcloud.com/chameleon-music/ ... old-friend
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
- KVRAF
- 9800 posts since 18 Aug, 2007 from NYC
Nicely done. Very short as mentioned but engaging. The 2nd one, Silence and Tears (Goodbye Old Friend) in particular has a definite ebb and flow to it. It’s not static. It nicely sets a mood, but then redirects that somewhere more intriguing or hopeful by the end.
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Rene Asologuitar Rene Asologuitar https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=558873
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- 980 posts since 2 Apr, 2022
Very nice musical compositions.
Your recording is very nice, high quality sound.
I love your musicality, very simple and truly beautiful sounds.
Rene
Your recording is very nice, high quality sound.
I love your musicality, very simple and truly beautiful sounds.
Rene
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aaron aardvark aaron aardvark https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=248508
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- 2667 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles
ChameleonMusic,
Thank you for the reviews! Now your music: "The Space in Between": sounds like you are using high end plugins (both songs). Could be nice background music for a movie or TV show (for both songs). Nice melodies and Very nice overall (for both songs)! "Silence & Tears": this one sounds sad, but well done also.
Thank you for the reviews! Now your music: "The Space in Between": sounds like you are using high end plugins (both songs). Could be nice background music for a movie or TV show (for both songs). Nice melodies and Very nice overall (for both songs)! "Silence & Tears": this one sounds sad, but well done also.
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
- KVRAF
- 11506 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
"Couple of Miniatures" - I thought you had contrived to write an ode to a mini-bar
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ChameleonMusic ChameleonMusic https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=430348
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- 1611 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK
Thank you very much for the feedback - much appreciated.elxsound wrote: ↑Wed May 25, 2022 3:26 pm Nicely done. Very short as mentioned but engaging. The 2nd one, Silence and Tears (Goodbye Old Friend) in particular has a definite ebb and flow to it. It’s not static. It nicely sets a mood, but then redirects that somewhere more intriguing or hopeful by the end.
Yes, the 2nd piece does end in a more hopeful place - glad you spotted that little twist in the tail!
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
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ChameleonMusic ChameleonMusic https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=430348
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- 1611 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK
Thanks for having a listen, Rene - your feedback is much appreciated.Rene Asologuitar wrote: ↑Wed May 25, 2022 5:58 pm Very nice musical compositions.
Your recording is very nice, high quality sound.
I love your musicality, very simple and truly beautiful sounds.
Rene
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
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ChameleonMusic ChameleonMusic https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=430348
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Cheers Aaron - yeah, the 2nd one has a much more 'down' / sad tone to it without a doubt!aaron aardvark wrote: ↑Thu May 26, 2022 3:33 am ChameleonMusic,
Thank you for the reviews! Now your music: "The Space in Between": sounds like you are using high end plugins (both songs). Could be nice background music for a movie or TV show (for both songs). Nice melodies and Very nice overall (for both songs)! "Silence & Tears": this one sounds sad, but well done also.
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
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ChameleonMusic ChameleonMusic https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=430348
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- 1611 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK
My parents had a bloomin' mini-bar way back in the 70s...I remember all those little bottles!
Bizarre thing is - they NEVER ever drank any of them!
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
- KVRian
- 973 posts since 21 May, 2020 from germany
Hi Mark,
really nice ones. I find the second piece very "successful". Very round and self-contained.
The instrumentation bothers me a bit on the first track. I don't know why, but my classical training is probably to blame. The question for me was; for who is this actually written for? At first it seems like a piece for piano, strings and some wind instruments. Then suddenly it's for "choir" and solo cello. That "jump" was too big for me. That probably doesn't bother most people. But I thought I'd write it down. Maybe you don't agree with that either - but maybe it's also some "food" for some further thoughts. (If I write: everything is great - that might not bring any progress ). Sound quality and mix is great as always.
really nice ones. I find the second piece very "successful". Very round and self-contained.
The instrumentation bothers me a bit on the first track. I don't know why, but my classical training is probably to blame. The question for me was; for who is this actually written for? At first it seems like a piece for piano, strings and some wind instruments. Then suddenly it's for "choir" and solo cello. That "jump" was too big for me. That probably doesn't bother most people. But I thought I'd write it down. Maybe you don't agree with that either - but maybe it's also some "food" for some further thoughts. (If I write: everything is great - that might not bring any progress ). Sound quality and mix is great as always.
it is better to have a track with some mistakes than a track without any soul
myself in 2022
myself in 2022
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ChameleonMusic ChameleonMusic https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=430348
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I agree about the 2nd one + that's very much the feedback I'm getting beyond KVR as well.tomtom1 wrote: ↑Sat May 28, 2022 11:12 am Hi Mark,
really nice ones. I find the second piece very "successful". Very round and self-contained.
The instrumentation bothers me a bit on the first track. I don't know why, but my classical training is probably to blame. The question for me was; for who is this actually written for? At first it seems like a piece for piano, strings and some wind instruments. Then suddenly it's for "choir" and solo cello. That "jump" was too big for me. That probably doesn't bother most people. But I thought I'd write it down. Maybe you don't agree with that either - but maybe it's also some "food" for some further thoughts. (If I write: everything is great - that might not bring any progress ). Sound quality and mix is great as always.
1st one - you're right that there is a significant shift as the cello / choir enter and I understand your point entirely. It was very much deliberate, but may not work for some listeners...you're not the first to mention it, although others have really enjoyed the sudden expansion.
I did originally keep the piano motif going as well alongside the cello / choir, but felt that it distracted from them - particularly rhythmically with the 5/4 time signature.
There are some links between the 2 sections:
Thematic material is all closely linked - particularly melodically.
The winds / strings continue unchanged in the background behind the choir / cello solo.
By the way the 'winds / strings / brass' are all hybrid synthesis / sample library timbres in my quest for subtle movement in those sustained parts....took bloody ages to do!
Thanks for the detailed feedback - very useful / helpful.
Yes, that might come from your classical background I suspect, as I do the same thing myself sometimes when listening to others...The question for me was; for who is this actually written for?
As live performers it can be hard to get our heads around such pieces being just written as they are for VST / electronic sound sources and NOT for live performance as such. if I was writing this as a score for performance, I suspect I would do it quite differently.
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
- KVRist
- 471 posts since 20 Nov, 2021
In terms of sound and composition, very nice pieces. I enjoyed them.
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ChameleonMusic ChameleonMusic https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=430348
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- 1611 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK
Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment...always appreciated!margaret0547 wrote: ↑Sat May 28, 2022 3:38 pm In terms of sound and composition, very nice pieces. I enjoyed them.
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
- KVRAF
- 11506 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
I've listened to "The Space in Between" quite a few times, and I like it. I'm not concerned about the change in instrumentation. As a piece of "stand-alone" music, it works for me, and and I reckon it would be fine used in a movie/TV soundtrack setting.
Good work
Good work
- KVRAF
- 1988 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Space in between: a very tasteful piece. Loved the blending of the choir in, subtle at first.
Silence and tears: love the textures and the "colour" of the winds. Ending on major was satisfying ending.
Silence and tears: love the textures and the "colour" of the winds. Ending on major was satisfying ending.