into the club - out of the club [electronic]
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 973 posts since 21 May, 2020 from germany
someone enters the club through the front door - after some serious trouble he leaves through the backdoor - tbh, i've never been in a club...
like always if someone recognize a really "disruptive" element - something too loud, harsh (the bell sound is really tricky...) - kick too loud etc. don't hold back, write it down
have a nice day!
https://soundcloud.com/treib-haus-81860 ... f-the-club
like always if someone recognize a really "disruptive" element - something too loud, harsh (the bell sound is really tricky...) - kick too loud etc. don't hold back, write it down
have a nice day!
https://soundcloud.com/treib-haus-81860 ... f-the-club
it is better to have a track with some mistakes than a track without any soul
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- KVRAF
- 7624 posts since 21 Dec, 2002 from MD USA
starts off pretty suddenly, might be cool to make an intro. I can see that bell being really tricky for sure. I really liked the change up at one minute. I would rework that around 1:50, it just gets too crowded with sounds there and doesn't sound quite right. Maybe if you hard pan a thing or two might help or just take out something all together. Ending was cool. This needs and intro and i would seriously make it a little longer to make each part a little less abrupt.
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- KVRist
- 471 posts since 20 Nov, 2021
I liked this one, pleasant sound in the intro and ending.
- KVRAF
- 1626 posts since 28 Oct, 2005 from Finland
Nice instrumental music. I liked the composition and joyful mood. Good structure and sounds.
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Rene Asologuitar Rene Asologuitar https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=558873
- KVRian
- 980 posts since 2 Apr, 2022
Hi tomtom1,
I love all the sounds introduced, especially on 0:56.
The mix sounds balance to me, well done.
Rene
I love all the sounds introduced, especially on 0:56.
The mix sounds balance to me, well done.
Rene
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- KVRian
- 950 posts since 30 Nov, 2004
nice use of the legacy cell guitar, that's also on cherry blossom girl by air.
Or, maybe I'm wrong?
I like the bass from 1 min
to me it feels like a great canvas, but still waiting for a kick ass synth solo on top of it? but that's my taste
Or, maybe I'm wrong?
I like the bass from 1 min
to me it feels like a great canvas, but still waiting for a kick ass synth solo on top of it? but that's my taste
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 973 posts since 21 May, 2020 from germany
Tbh i didn't know that song of Air. But i see the similarities. I think you mean the ARP-sound in the beginning? - it is the Synapse Obession as a Rack extension. The rest is standard Reason-synths from Version 11 Suite.Jesse Gorter wrote: ↑Thu Sep 15, 2022 9:57 am nice use of the legacy cell guitar, that's also on cherry blossom girl by air.
Or, maybe I'm wrong?
I like the bass from 1 min
to me it feels like a great canvas, but still waiting for a kick ass synth solo on top of it? but that's my taste
about the missing melody. I understand what you mean. but i tried to get away from melodies a little bit. I've also tried to concentrate more on the technical things - that's why my tracks are all pretty short at the moment.
Thx for listening!
it is better to have a track with some mistakes than a track without any soul
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 973 posts since 21 May, 2020 from germany
Rene Asologuitar wrote: ↑Tue Sep 13, 2022 8:19 pm Hi tomtom1,
I love all the sounds introduced, especially on 0:56.
The mix sounds balance to me, well done.
Rene
Thanks for listening! Glad you liked it.
it is better to have a track with some mistakes than a track without any soul
myself in 2022
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 973 posts since 21 May, 2020 from germany
Thx for listening. I tried to focus on the more technical things. That is why it is relative short.ATS wrote: ↑Mon Sep 12, 2022 1:12 am starts off pretty suddenly, might be cool to make an intro. I can see that bell being really tricky for sure. I really liked the change up at one minute. I would rework that around 1:50, it just gets too crowded with sounds there and doesn't sound quite right. Maybe if you hard pan a thing or two might help or just take out something all together. Ending was cool. This needs and intro and i would seriously make it a little longer to make each part a little less abrupt.
You are right about that part - there is going on a lot. The idea was to end it with a more noise-like bang. But i am not 100% happy with it. (I am always afraid of hard panning - it is true!! )
it is better to have a track with some mistakes than a track without any soul
myself in 2022
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- KVRAF
- 11506 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
Interesting comment. I think I am the same. I rarely pan a sound more that 60% from the centre.
I tried it (100%) once, and it wasn't a success, so now use panning more "conservatively".
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 973 posts since 21 May, 2020 from germany
ha... 60%... I get abdominal pain when it exceeds 50% ...
it is better to have a track with some mistakes than a track without any soul
myself in 2022
myself in 2022