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autodafe · Post by **autodafe** » Fri Sep 13, 2002 10:56 am

i could try to translate some of the song i wrote for my ex-band, when i was 20, but my english is not so good

Kriminal · Post by **Kriminal** » Sun Sep 15, 2002 8:18 am

More dribbly guff from me on the submissions thread. More cheerfull than my usual depressing shite, but surperbly CHEESY

I seem to keep waking up with a head full of poncey lyrics this weekend

Oh well, better out than in

Kriminal · Post by **Kriminal** » Sun Sep 15, 2002 6:50 pm

Apparently, S Club 7 have show an interest in my shite lyrics, so grab them while you can

pHuzZ · Post by **pHuzZ** » Sun Sep 15, 2002 6:51 pm

[even if you did steal my line . . .

]

. . . cheers

rob

donkey tugger · Post by **donkey tugger** » Sun Sep 15, 2002 6:52 pm

Hehe, don't mock sonny, when I came home this evening I've had messages from an indie label about some stuff I sent them last week. One of the songs he liked featured your shit lyrics!! There may be money in them there piles!!!

Kriminal · Post by **Kriminal** » Sun Sep 15, 2002 6:54 pm

Oh yeah, forgot to say that Phuzzy boi told me that

Which song was that then Donk

p.s. chitty chat

frozentitan · Post by **frozentitan** » Sun Sep 15, 2002 9:21 pm

I like your lyrics Kriminal. I think they would make very good songs. I keep wanting to try my hand at putting some of the lyrics submissions into a song, but I never seem to have the time.

I wish lyrics flowed from me as easily as they seem to from you Krim.

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Tue Sep 17, 2002 7:21 am

bluedad

sorry it takes me so long
i have finished the new drum track and i played in the keys again
have to do a new vocal

i programmed an organ but the people around me (gf / doughter) say they like it better without the organ part ...

somehow it is not an easy birth.

later

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Thu Sep 19, 2002 10:12 am

howdy yall

I posted some new lyrics
hope yall like them.

Remco

crimsonwarlock · Post by **crimsonwarlock** » Tue Sep 24, 2002 11:24 am

Hey Remco, I really like that last one (about religion). If time permits I'll take a stab at that one

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Tue Sep 24, 2002 11:38 am

Hey there ! thank you sir

and time does !
use it ... i am curious ... the last song you have posted was supercool ... i play it often.
and we all have the same ammount of time .... 24 hours
all great man of the past had the same 24 hours a day as well
they have made cars / dishwashers / computers / airoplanes / you name it
and it all started with words and dreams.

Regards !

see you in the mighty highlights after all is said and done

and hopefully some time before that, to drink some poison and smoke some kill (booz and canna)
hows you and your woman doing ?

bluedad · Post by **bluedad** » Tue Sep 24, 2002 11:52 am

Yes, the religion lyric is very good. crimson, i would love to hear you do it.
bluedad

Virtual · Post by **Virtual** » Thu Sep 26, 2002 1:05 am

Hey !!

Just posted some various lyrics that I wrote...
Hope you like 'em...

Peace.
Zeb.

Virtual · Post by **Virtual** » Sun Sep 29, 2002 8:19 am

I like Pu's lyric about the decent chaplain, but there seems to be some words, In My Humble Opinion, that don't quite fit together stylistically.
For instance

I can forgive your profound ignorance on how i got
this way
I gues i`m just a "loser" i must say to my" dismay"

I don't think someone who calls themselves loser, uses the word dismay in the same sentence.
Just seemed weird.
But otherwise it's a really nice lyric, seems to be from an observant mind.

I'd like to hear critisisms of my own lyrics aswell.
Some of them were written while going thru several phases I had, after becoming a reborn christian, which was an extremely intense experience for me.

Kriminal · Post by **Kriminal** » Sun Oct 13, 2002 7:55 pm

Heads Up......more miserable dribblings from the king of maudlin

lyrics collaboration - DISCUSSION