Hi All.
I've been struggling with a track for ages. I keep coming back to it every now & then to have a tweak, but it's missing something, or there's too much something. I was wondering if I could borrow your ears to offer another perspective. Any comments very much welcomed!
Thanks!
Piamiro
Request for help with a track
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- KVRian
- 920 posts since 30 Nov, 2002 from NE Japan
https://miroj.bandcamp.com/
toujours humectez la mouture. toujours.
toujours humectez la mouture. toujours.
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
Access denied!Miro wrote: Thu Jan 30, 2025 11:16 am Hi All.
I've been struggling with a track for ages. I keep coming back to it every now & then to have a tweak, but it's missing something, or there's too much something. I was wondering if I could borrow your ears to offer another perspective. Any comments very much welcomed!
Thanks!
Piamiro
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 920 posts since 30 Nov, 2002 from NE Japan
Oops. Sorry about that
. Should be good to go now.https://miroj.bandcamp.com/
toujours humectez la mouture. toujours.
toujours humectez la mouture. toujours.
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
Had a listen. Very nice chord progression and use of the sounds. Lots of things you could do with it
-chord inversions/substitutions, key changes, swapping melodies and chords between the instruments in terms of composition etc. Depends on how you want to proceed with it and what you want it to be; keep it fairly ethereal, or go for the big build up then full on bombast?!
-chord inversions/substitutions, key changes, swapping melodies and chords between the instruments in terms of composition etc. Depends on how you want to proceed with it and what you want it to be; keep it fairly ethereal, or go for the big build up then full on bombast?!
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- KVRAF
- 3850 posts since 5 Mar, 2004 from Millicent Australia
As Mr Tugger says, there is plenty to work from here. The thing is what is your Scene & Story? Scene you seem to have but I fairly quickly start to think that you have no sense of what this is doing, where it might want to go.
Mixwise I think the string parts are overwhelming which would make it harder to work in as they take over.
It seems to need a new idea, probably strapped to a new instrument. What if there were a Gary Moore geetar, or an Acker Bilk Clarinet...?
I like helping to finish tracks where there are good ideas but it has stalled but the other person needs to be open or it grinds to a halt pretty fast. Several of those have turned into released albums.
Mixwise I think the string parts are overwhelming which would make it harder to work in as they take over.
It seems to need a new idea, probably strapped to a new instrument. What if there were a Gary Moore geetar, or an Acker Bilk Clarinet...?
I like helping to finish tracks where there are good ideas but it has stalled but the other person needs to be open or it grinds to a halt pretty fast. Several of those have turned into released albums.
Benedict Roff-Marsh
http://www.benedictroffmarsh.com
http://www.benedictroffmarsh.com
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 920 posts since 30 Nov, 2002 from NE Japan
Thanks very much for the replies.
Yes, I think I'll pare it all the way back again and try to think about the goal of the track. Hopefully I can post an updated version sometime soon.
Thanks again
Yes, I think I'll pare it all the way back again and try to think about the goal of the track. Hopefully I can post an updated version sometime soon.
Thanks again
https://miroj.bandcamp.com/
toujours humectez la mouture. toujours.
toujours humectez la mouture. toujours.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 920 posts since 30 Nov, 2002 from NE Japan
Hey, thanks for the listen. I'll look to post the new version sometime soon.
https://miroj.bandcamp.com/
toujours humectez la mouture. toujours.
toujours humectez la mouture. toujours.
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- KVRer
- 1 posts since 18 Feb, 2025
