Hi, I've been working for 2 months on this song and spent a lot of money in the process, I'm proud of the results but would really want your feedback and I hope that you'd enjoy it.
https://soundcloud.com/dan-ron-13114060 ... -the-beach
Monday at the beach
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- KVRAF
- 23170 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Okay, gave this a listen. My honest feedback.
Very strange track. That's not a bad thing. But it is what it is. Almost sounds like a conglomeration of several genres. I would go out on a limb and say this is one of the most unusual things I've heard in a while. Again, not a bad thing.
Bottom Line: I was not bored listening to this. Though I have to admit, I don't know quite what to make of it.
Very strange track. That's not a bad thing. But it is what it is. Almost sounds like a conglomeration of several genres. I would go out on a limb and say this is one of the most unusual things I've heard in a while. Again, not a bad thing.
Bottom Line: I was not bored listening to this. Though I have to admit, I don't know quite what to make of it.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 715 posts since 7 Sep, 2012
Thanks Wags, that's much appreciated. To be completely honest here, 95% of my songs are serious and deeply personal, so once at a time, I have to get away from all of that and let my nonsense desire and craziness to get the control for some time in order to take it easier before coming back to the serious music.
If I even release an album, out of 10 songs, there will be 1 hidden at the end, which is be a crazy track which isn't related (at least directly) to the other songs.
But then again, I guess that also the crazy and the nonsense parts says about my personality as much as the more retrospective songs do, they're also part of who I'm but currently non the main musical identity I'm try to establish.
Hope it makes sense.
So this song has no purpose, there's nothing to make out of it, just a freedom for one's imagination without obliging to any rule, trying 15 genres for 1 song (that's how my imagination works sometimes, where it's still in a pure form in my head), when Intro, Verse1, Chorus, Verse2, Chorus, Bridge, Chorus, Outro aren't really relevant, or any other organized form, because that little crazy voice in the head which wants to say somethings, doesn't think in such structures, but more in an abstract manner where everything can mixed together (or not).
But if you listen closely, there is still a musical theme which lasts till the end of the song and should give a familiar ground when everything else is rapidly changing.
If I even release an album, out of 10 songs, there will be 1 hidden at the end, which is be a crazy track which isn't related (at least directly) to the other songs.
But then again, I guess that also the crazy and the nonsense parts says about my personality as much as the more retrospective songs do, they're also part of who I'm but currently non the main musical identity I'm try to establish.
Hope it makes sense.
So this song has no purpose, there's nothing to make out of it, just a freedom for one's imagination without obliging to any rule, trying 15 genres for 1 song (that's how my imagination works sometimes, where it's still in a pure form in my head), when Intro, Verse1, Chorus, Verse2, Chorus, Bridge, Chorus, Outro aren't really relevant, or any other organized form, because that little crazy voice in the head which wants to say somethings, doesn't think in such structures, but more in an abstract manner where everything can mixed together (or not).
But if you listen closely, there is still a musical theme which lasts till the end of the song and should give a familiar ground when everything else is rapidly changing.
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- KVRAF
- 23170 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
I get it. Trust me, I have my weird songs too.