https://soundcloud.com/dan-ron-13114060 ... -warning-aAnother Monday, another hallway's hum, But Sarah's locker, it's always overcome. Left wide open, a gaping, careless maw, Ignoring all the unspoken schoolyard law.
Open locker! Danger on the breeze! A digital ghost, whispering through the trees! The void awaits, past history's forgotten keys!
Someone stole her homework, vanished in the night, But next, a dark secret, hidden from the light. A forbidden spellbook, bound in ancient leather, Now whispers curses, no matter the weather.
A tiny portal, to dimensions unknown, Where homework monsters have eternally grown. They crave lost pencils, and binders of blue, And Sarah's open locker, they're coming for you!
OPEN LOCKER! THE ABYSS STARES BACK! YOUR GRADES ARE FALLING, ON A ONE-WAY TRACK! THE HALLWAY DEMONS, READY TO ATTACK!
Her lunchbox disappeared, now a haunted balloon, Floating through classrooms, beneath a blood-red moon. Her gym shoes now dance, a macabre ballet, In the empty sports hall, at the close of the day
The Open Locker
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- KVRian
- 715 posts since 7 Sep, 2012
Hello, being working on this one for a few weeks, following my previous track "Monday at the beach" who got now indie following, "The Open Locker", based upon a true story.
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- KVRAF
- 23170 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Wow, that is some far out stuff. I have to ask. How were the vocals done? This is one of the coolest things I have heard in a long time.
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- KVRAF
- 3392 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany
Open locker: A clear, very dynamic song – I really like it!
The "open locker" part is catchy. Some extremely
noticeable breaks – so things really get going here, just
like in the locker room? Fantastic song! Keep it up –
well done – a pleasure to listen to!
The "open locker" part is catchy. Some extremely
noticeable breaks – so things really get going here, just
like in the locker room? Fantastic song! Keep it up –
well done – a pleasure to listen to!
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de
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- KVRAF
- 1994 posts since 18 May, 2021
With all the phase issues it sounds like A.I. to me. Is it? If it's not, I sincerely apologize.
When the data is corrupt in the Desert of the Real, Beyond the Last Thought, where intuition reigns, is the solace that will embolden and strengthen the soul, giving hope once more to this age of failing technique. eassae.com
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- KVRAF
- 1994 posts since 18 May, 2021
(multiple hours later): I was curious so I put this through the Submit hub A.I. Song Checker and it gave me a 87% probability that this song is purely A.I. generated.
When the data is corrupt in the Desert of the Real, Beyond the Last Thought, where intuition reigns, is the solace that will embolden and strengthen the soul, giving hope once more to this age of failing technique. eassae.com