KVR Audio

osiris · Post by **osiris** » Fri Jan 23, 2026 5:08 pm

So I wrote this. It's pop pap, but Ann agreed to sing it, and I like the way it turned out (mostly).
I think I would up the bass, but someone said to me I have to decide what the dominant would be - kick or bass, and the kick is a big part of the main riff, so there you go. Any feedback welcome.
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eassae · Post by **eassae** » Fri Jan 23, 2026 9:27 pm

The lyrics are catchy. I imagine that they would do very well on the dance floor. Good work. For some reason some of the sound design made me think of when AFX did the Imperial March. Mix works well at quiet and loud volumes. Cool to see you starting to produce your lyrics.

osiris · Post by **osiris** » Sat Jan 24, 2026 2:03 pm

Thanks e. This is the second one I've written after Summer's Coming.

ChameleonMusic · Post by **ChameleonMusic** » Sun Jan 25, 2026 5:15 pm

Enjoyed it - good groove and some great melodic hooks as well!

''Kick versus bass'' - sounds fine to me and I'm gonna avoid any other comments / hints / suggestions as it's a pit of vipers and I'll get someone ''screaming'' at me!

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Mon Jan 26, 2026 9:28 pm

This is freaking awesome. Nothing else needs to be said.

osiris · Post by **osiris** » Tue Jan 27, 2026 2:24 pm

You're too kind wags.

frank1985 · Post by **frank1985** » Tue Jan 27, 2026 10:23 pm

Banging tune

osiris · Post by **osiris** » Wed Jan 28, 2026 2:13 pm

Fantastic frank.

Sweet As Sugar[EDM(?)]