I'm new here. Can I ask for feedback on a track I produced?

[thebestialtheory]

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Hi. I recently started producing techno in Ableton. I've been learning a lot and I think I've made something pretty decent, but I need opinions, feedback, and any advice you can give me to keep improving, both in composition and mixing. If possible, here's the link to my track. I hope you can help me.

https://on.soundcloud.com/7qo7p5IhK6W6xfbIQQ (https://on.soundcloud.com/7qo7p5IhK6W6xfbIQQ)

[harvon]

The lack of replies could mean that your track is good enough for local techno producers, they not hearing anything obvious to improve.

I'm not qualified to discuss matters techno, only to tell that the track is not 'catchy' to my mind, that there is no desire to listen it some more times.

[Hipster Bales]

Hi. I recently started producing techno in Ableton. I've been learning a lot and I think I've made something pretty decent, but I need opinions, feedback, and any advice you can give me to keep improving, both in composition and mixing. If possible, here's the link to my track. I hope you can help me.

https://on.soundcloud.com/7qo7p5IhK6W6xfbIQQ

Really nice work. I quite like the intro.

[Samiver]

Link doesn't appear to be working for me.

[Hipster Bales]

Link doesn't appear to be working for me.

I think he deleted it

[enroe]

Hi. I recently started producing techno in Ableton. I've been learning a lot and I think I've made something pretty decent, but I need opinions, feedback, and any advice you can give me to keep improving, both in composition and mixing. If possible, here's the link to my track. I hope you can help me.

https://on.soundcloud.com/7qo7p5IhK6W6xfbIQQ

Why did you remove the link?

Here at the KVR Cafe, all sorts of people post: beginners,
advanced players, very advanced players. They post everything:
short snippets, entire songs, even whole albums. All genres are
available here ...

[osiris]

I was going to tell him the link looked sketchy. My SC links never start with on.soundcloud. Not that I've noticed, but I do copy links from the address bar so this may be a Share thing in SC.

[wagtunes]

Link gone. Oh well.