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I was inspired by the Tracktion beatslicing thread to make this:

Mobius rough mix (Ogg)

I think I may have been overly influenced by three albums worth of Jamiroquai ringtones I made last week. :help:

Rough mix only so far.. tell me what you think?

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no-one? :cry:

It's cos I mentioned Jamiroquai isn't it? :-o

Its only a bit like Jamiroquai.. just the bassline really.. it rocks out a couple of times too.. don't be scared!

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downloading now

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listening now

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:-o amazed now

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OK, as you even shouted for comments, here's some:

- Liked the intro.
- Drums too busy and repetitive for my taste.
- Drums and bass are somewhat distracted from chords and melodies. It's getting a bit better after the middle part when the wah guitar comes in, somewhat glues the parts together to a certain extent. I would however use some 16ths in the piano comping part as well.
- Middle part is ok. Perhaps a bit pathetic, but I guess that's what it's meant to be like.
- The melody could be a bit more catchy. Whatever that means...
- Overall sound is fine, maybe the leads (both guitar and synth) could be a tad louder. But I'm no Mr. GoldenEars (let alone platinum ears).
- The lead guitar at the end could bite a bit more and be a bit louder too. Some good lines there, perhaps a bit in-concrete (might have to do with the sound too).
There are 3 kinds of people:
Those who can do maths and those who can't.

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Thanks for the comments.. slightly confused as there's no wah guitar in there.. :?

"middle part".. do you mean the rocky bit where the bassline drops out?

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OK, it's a synth part, somewhat sounding like a wah guitar. Didn't listen closely (preparing dinnner ATM).

Yeah, I meant the "rocky" part.
There are 3 kinds of people:
Those who can do maths and those who can't.

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