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Genetic_Junk · Post by **Genetic_Junk** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:54 pm

sazb30 wrote:Wow!! Just gorgeous!! I can't believe you kept me hooked for the full nine and half minutes. Reminded me a bit of flaming lips. Very, very lovely indeed

I love the pink robots. Thanks for listing and commenting. Glad you are enjoying it.

Genetic_Junk · Post by **Genetic_Junk** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:58 pm

Heathcliff wrote:Awesome! Really keeps one interested over its full length. Good job!
Thanks.

Thanks for listening Heathcliff. I created a bunch of little parts that I liked and somehow strung them together. I guess the strings weren't too bad either.

Genetic_Junk · Post by **Genetic_Junk** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:00 pm

Laguna Rising wrote:Cool stuff ! I enjoyed so much the soft, almost introspective vibe.
Perfect arrangement to covey that feel
Excellent production

Cheers

I'm pleasantly surprised that the haphazard arrangement worked. Thanks for your comments.

androidlove · Post by **androidlove** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 2:06 am

i'd prefer if the distorted breaks were heavier an less repetitious. it reminds me of 90's alternative. i'd like it to have more of that shine as i REALLY miss 90's alternative. I really like your singing and and harmonies and need less verb/echo and more volume on it. it's more alternative than sonic youth/crawling chaos. please tighten for me and other sad creeps like me

Jazzyspoon · Post by **Jazzyspoon** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:16 am

Genetic_Junk wrote:
Jazzyspoon wrote:I can't wait to hear this, GJ. Where can I get a bunch of your tracks in one spot? I would like an album worth of material in one sitting.
Hey Jazzyspoon. I had about a hundred tracks online but they are gone due to site problems. I have a few track up under /music_samples but you've already listened and commented on those. I need to upload more.

dang, send me an album's worth of your fav's someday. This track is wonderful, btw. Great work. I have listened to it several times (even played guitar along to it for a while).

Genetic_Junk · Post by **Genetic_Junk** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:23 am

androidlove wrote:i'd prefer if the distorted breaks were heavier an less repetitious. it reminds me of 90's alternative. i'd like it to have more of that shine as i REALLY miss 90's alternative. I really like your singing and and harmonies and need less verb/echo and more volume on it. it's more alternative than sonic youth/crawling chaos. please tighten for me and other sad creeps like me

Thanks for listening and commenting anriodlove.

By shine do mean high frequencies? I was listening to the song along side System of a Down and it does sound very dull.

I am a sad creep too, but I'm not sure what you mean by tighten. You mean the individual parts go on for too long because they are too repetitious or remove some parts altogether or is it just a word to sum up your other comments?

Glad you like the singing, like many people I'm a bit shy about it so I try to cover it up. Though maybe double taking and removing some of the echo wouldn't offend me.

Genetic_Junk · Post by **Genetic_Junk** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:27 am

Jazzyspoon wrote:
Genetic_Junk wrote:
Jazzyspoon wrote:I can't wait to hear this, GJ. Where can I get a bunch of your tracks in one spot? I would like an album worth of material in one sitting.
Hey Jazzyspoon. I had about a hundred tracks online but they are gone due to site problems. I have a few track up under /music_samples but you've already listened and commented on those. I need to upload more.
dang, send me an album's worth of your fav's someday. This track is wonderful, btw. Great work. I have listened to it several times (even played guitar along to it for a while).

I have a couple CDs I made for people as Christmas presents. I'll upload one or two of those this weekend.

When I used to listen to Boards of Canada in my car I would sing along with the emptier songs. It's a great compliment to inspire improvisation. Thanks for listening.

androidlove · Post by **androidlove** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 4:00 am

Genetic_Junk wrote:By shine do mean high frequencies?

i mean tighten and polish. there are nice lo fi parts like the intro and 8:50.

i think a lot will be fixed by bringing out your vocals. they're either buried or covered in effects.

1:16 needs something...anything

4:44 is GOAL!

imagine you're a commercial producer and look for the commercial value. there's tons to be mined in this. i'm saying this is more on the pop side than the experimental side and you should go more pop

i love this song. i'm just selfishly asking for a custom order

androidlove · Post by **androidlove** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 4:15 am

the hanging snare in the opening vocals is cute, but could you at least add a roll? that section really draws in the listener. are you trying to pull the listener out? i think a general audience would prefer the snare on the beat

androidlove · Post by **androidlove** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:50 pm

i got a second opinion. my gf agrees with me....she better

perhaps if you combined the sparse transitions into a massive break?

Genetic_Junk · Post by **Genetic_Junk** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:19 pm

Thanks for clarifying anriodlove. I'm not sure I could be the BK of songs. I sort of like how it stradles the boundaries between the strange and the poppy.

androidlove · Post by **androidlove** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:55 pm

i gotta ask. were you inspired by smashing pumpkins and polyphonic spree? who is bk?

Genetic_Junk · Post by **Genetic_Junk** » Thu Sep 17, 2009 1:11 am

I listened to Siamese Dream so much in middle school. Smashing Pumpkins will forever be ingrained in my musical consciousness.

BK, in response to your request for custom order, Burger King's slogan, have it your way.

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