donkeyt-seeing red-indie funk jangle pop
- KVRAF
- 11950 posts since 31 Aug, 2013 from Someplace else
Nice. I would have the vocals up a touch. Arrangement is good, fx are good. Playing is good. Song is fun (although I think the lyric isn't
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“The Generals sat, and the lines on the map, moved from side to side.”
― Pink Floyd
― Pink Floyd
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- KVRAF
- 2644 posts since 17 Apr, 2004
Or until you suggest I add brass to one of my tracks, and I give you the standard "I always find programmed brass sounds fake" reply...donkey tugger wrote:I'll wager that's bastard brass dispensed with for at least another year when I foolishly again think, "ah, some brass would be good on this..".
Not to say I never add brass to anything, but I do sometimes wish I had brass instruments and that it hadn't been ~30 years since I last played them. At this stage, the programmed stuff will probably sound better than my feeble attempts
Voted KVR's resident drunk Robert Smith impersonator (thanks Frantz!)
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JazzyClarinetMan JazzyClarinetMan https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=425029
- KVRist
- 69 posts since 25 Aug, 2018 from United Kingdom
Memories of my slightly more youthful days - I was still old in the seventies.
It came across as a well developed successful song when I listened.
I refuse to ask about the name DonkeyTugger as my wild farmer nephew has led me far enough down that particular path thank you.
It came across as a well developed successful song when I listened.
I refuse to ask about the name DonkeyTugger as my wild farmer nephew has led me far enough down that particular path thank you.
Jazz Clarinet Rocks - well sort of Swings anyway!
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- Topic Starter
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
I always usually adjust the vocals a bit (more often than not up a touch ) after coming back to a song after a week or so - bit of perspective and all that. I'll sit on this a bit longer then see how it sounds. Got some Stooges ripo..homage thing on the go now..Bombadil wrote:Nice. I would have the vocals up a touch. Arrangement is good, fx are good. Playing is good. Song is fun (although I think the lyric isn't).
Lyrically, seem to be writing quite a bit of obliquely political stuff in my old age..world being how it is. Best leave it there, don't want to end up in HPC..
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- Topic Starter
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
sjm wrote:Or until you suggest I add brass to one of my tracks, and I give you the standard "I always find programmed brass sounds fake" reply...donkey tugger wrote:I'll wager that's bastard brass dispensed with for at least another year when I foolishly again think, "ah, some brass would be good on this..".
Not to say I never add brass to anything, but I do sometimes wish I had brass instruments and that it hadn't been ~30 years since I last played them. At this stage, the programmed stuff will probably sound better than my feeble attempts
Don't know how hard it would be to come back to playing brass instruments as I never have done. Got back into the guitar quite easily, but the last time I played the drums (briefly in a shop) it was appalling - I blame the fact that there were too many toms.
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- Topic Starter
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
Cheers..the name was all down to my poor handwriting, and the peverse interpretation of it by one of my friends...JazzyClarinetMan wrote:Memories of my slightly more youthful days - I was still old in the seventies.
It came across as a well developed successful song when I listened.
I refuse to ask about the name DonkeyTugger
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
It hurts... a lot! :0)donkey tugger wrote:Don't know how hard it would be to come back to playing brass instruments as I never have done.
Loved the track by the way...great vibe!
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- Topic Starter
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
You'd probably need to ease yourself back into it with a new technique...ChamMusic wrote:It hurts... a lot! :0)donkey tugger wrote:Don't know how hard it would be to come back to playing brass instruments as I never have done.
Loved the track by the way...great vibe!
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
:0)donkey tugger wrote:You'd probably need to ease yourself back into it with a new technique...ChamMusic wrote:It hurts... a lot! :0)donkey tugger wrote:Don't know how hard it would be to come back to playing brass instruments as I never have done.
Loved the track by the way...great vibe!
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aaron aardvark aaron aardvark https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=248508
- KVRAF
- 3082 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles
donkey tugger,
Thank you for the review! Now your song: I couldn't get the latest mp3 to play using Google Chrome. After wrestling with it for awhile, I got it to play using firefox. For the most part, it sounds like it came from the late 60's/early 70's (not a bad thing), except the ping pong delay. Singing is pretty good, perhaps a teensy bit pitchy. I like the brass section. The guitar playing and strings are fine. I like the bass riffs. It is good that it is upbeat. Nice job overall.
Thank you for the review! Now your song: I couldn't get the latest mp3 to play using Google Chrome. After wrestling with it for awhile, I got it to play using firefox. For the most part, it sounds like it came from the late 60's/early 70's (not a bad thing), except the ping pong delay. Singing is pretty good, perhaps a teensy bit pitchy. I like the brass section. The guitar playing and strings are fine. I like the bass riffs. It is good that it is upbeat. Nice job overall.
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- Topic Starter
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
aaron aardvark wrote: Sun Sep 30, 2018 3:53 am donkey tugger,
Thank you for the review! Now your song: I couldn't get the latest mp3 to play using Google Chrome. After wrestling with it for awhile, I got it to play using firefox. For the most part, it sounds like it came from the late 60's/early 70's (not a bad thing), except the ping pong delay. Singing is pretty good, perhaps a teensy bit pitchy. I like the brass section. The guitar playing and strings are fine. I like the bass riffs. It is good that it is upbeat. Nice job overall.![]()
Cheers. Which bits of the vocals sound out of tune to you? Given the style I obviously didn't want to autotune the life out of them, but I did think I'd corrected all the worst offenders!
- KVRAF
- 12167 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
I really liked the sound of the guitar/bass/drums, especially right at the beginning. It's got a lively sound, almost like a live recording. I thought the snare sounded great. Not overpowering, but it cut through the mix and had just the right amount of "snap". The strings worked out nicely. Nice clear vox. as usual, and the indie section was a good fit with the rest of the track.
I've been seeing a lot of Nile Rodgers on the telly recently. You've rattled his cage.
Good work
I've been seeing a lot of Nile Rodgers on the telly recently. You've rattled his cage.
Good work
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- Topic Starter
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
A belated thanks! Don't really drink that much these days, but when I do takes me ages to feel human again..seismic1 wrote: Wed Oct 03, 2018 12:34 am I really liked the sound of the guitar/bass/drums, especially right at the beginning. It's got a lively sound, almost like a live recording. I thought the snare sounded great. Not overpowering, but it cut through the mix and had just the right amount of "snap". The strings worked out nicely. Nice clear vox. as usual, and the indie section was a good fit with the rest of the track.
I've been seeing a lot of Nile Rodgers on the telly recently. You've rattled his cage.
Good work![]()
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- Topic Starter
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
As above! See,ms like this one is done and dusted then I reckon. Time to go back to the troublesome New Order ripoff perhaps, or mebbe a stab at something gospel tinged..Allomerus wrote: Wed Oct 03, 2018 1:00 am Enjoyed this. Vocals sound good and music is very tasty...
Well done!
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