Trousers of Melodies

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Kraku
KVRian
1408 posts since 13 Oct, 2003 from Prague, Czech Republic

Post Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:28 am

I decided to make a quick rock'n roll song. It took me about two evenings to create and it would still require about 6 more days of work but who cares... There's much more synthesizers, samplers and computers in that song that is instantly obvious :)

Trousers of Melodies


EDIT: Edited the link to a slightly updated version.
Last edited by Kraku on Thu Sep 18, 2008 9:28 am, edited 1 time in total.

xoxos
Mr Entertainment
12040 posts since 30 Apr, 2002 from i might peeramid

Post Mon Sep 15, 2008 4:08 pm

you kids with your incomprehensible lyrics :p
you come and go, you come and go. amitabha neither a follower nor a leader be tagore "where roads are made i lose my way" where there is certainty, consideration is absent.

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Krakatau
KVRAF
5469 posts since 25 May, 2002 from Bobo-dioulasso\BF__Geneva/CH

Post Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:05 am

As it is, i would maybe suggest to enhance the main voice for a better intelligibility

I like the idea of the voice's interpretation, the overall absence of pretention, and the way it abruptly stops


Sound like a Black Sabbath song of early seventies

( ...Though it just needs, perhaps, a bass line for instance ?)

:pray:

Kraku
KVRian
1408 posts since 13 Oct, 2003 from Prague, Czech Republic

Post Wed Sep 17, 2008 9:26 am

Yeah I have to admit that the vocals could benefit alot if mixed properly. The problem is that my personal deadline for this song was 15th of September and I won't touch the song after that deadline. It's a kind of a personal punishment for myself for not being more active while writing this song (I could have started it earlier etc.).

I try to do better with my next song :)

Kraku
KVRian
1408 posts since 13 Oct, 2003 from Prague, Czech Republic

Post Thu Sep 18, 2008 9:28 am

Well, I couldn't resist it and I mixed the vocals to be a bit more audible.

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Krakatau
KVRAF
5469 posts since 25 May, 2002 from Bobo-dioulasso\BF__Geneva/CH

Post Thu Sep 18, 2008 9:39 am

Kraku wrote: I couldn't resist
nobody's perfect, just a usual human weakness...

:P

...sound much better that said, therefore a very useful weakness !


:lol:

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