Point Blank
as always, love hearing feedback on this peeps
Respect
Sureno
Soulful vibin' flava - House Track
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1134 posts since 4 May, 2008 from West London Depot
ok, had some time out to learn new tricks and wanted to offer you guys my latest joint, on more of a soulful house tip i bring you my latest track
Point Blank
as always, love hearing feedback on this peeps
Respect
Sureno
Point Blank
as always, love hearing feedback on this peeps
Respect
Sureno
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- KVRAF
- 2267 posts since 9 Mar, 2009 from Copenhagen, Denmark
First and foremost, a soulful house track shouldn't be called "Point Blank"! That's more suited for hip-hop or punk 
Apart from that this is absolutely brilliant stuff. A solo would have been cool though. I think vibes would be a good choice here
I have some minor issues with the break/different chord changes in the mid part of the song as well. it's like they break up the flow for me but that could just be me not thinking straight 
Awesome work altogether though
Apart from that this is absolutely brilliant stuff. A solo would have been cool though. I think vibes would be a good choice here
I have some minor issues with the break/different chord changes in the mid part of the song as well. it's like they break up the flow for me but that could just be me not thinking straight Awesome work altogether though
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1134 posts since 4 May, 2008 from West London Depot
lol there's a hidden meaning behind the title, yeah i agree with the 2nd break down part, im a little puzzled as how to resolve this as of yet though?
