[rock] the other side of the planet
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2586 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany
Hi,
we recorded the current version of our strange song "another side of the planet" finally. If you take time (4:06) to listen please answer shortly:
1. Is this song too provocative?
2. What is your first spontaneous thought after listening?
3. What would you change in this song?
Link:
mp3 "The other Side of the Planet" 4:03 - 6mb
Greetinx,
Andy.
we recorded the current version of our strange song "another side of the planet" finally. If you take time (4:06) to listen please answer shortly:
1. Is this song too provocative?
2. What is your first spontaneous thought after listening?
3. What would you change in this song?
Link:
mp3 "The other Side of the Planet" 4:03 - 6mb
Greetinx,
Andy.
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de
- KVRAF
- 7152 posts since 4 Apr, 2005 from here and there
1) no, that's OK
2) well, it's solid rock with good breaks/variation, good vocals (a bit 80's ? no, it's probably the timbre...)
3) More snare, less kick (or maybe different eq)
2) well, it's solid rock with good breaks/variation, good vocals (a bit 80's ? no, it's probably the timbre...)
3) More snare, less kick (or maybe different eq)
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2586 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany
Aaahh, thank you, Laguna Rising, for your answers (and positive critics also). And yes - the kick may be a little too strong ... we'll consider this.
- KVRAF
- 11502 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
1) No
2) A little reminiscent of some Stranglers tracks?
3) I thought the vocals were fighting other instruments at a couple of points in the track, but eq may fix that. I thought the kick was ok, but that may just be my taste.
Good song
2) A little reminiscent of some Stranglers tracks?
3) I thought the vocals were fighting other instruments at a couple of points in the track, but eq may fix that. I thought the kick was ok, but that may just be my taste.
Good song
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- KVRAF
- 8072 posts since 12 Dec, 2003 from Canada
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- KVRAF
- 1530 posts since 17 Sep, 2002
1) i don't understand the question.
2) that was fun, it had some cool ideas.
3) drums are not driving enough (but then, i'm a snobby drummer....) and the lead guitar needs more distortion!
2) that was fun, it had some cool ideas.
3) drums are not driving enough (but then, i'm a snobby drummer....) and the lead guitar needs more distortion!
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2586 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany
@ seismic1, polysax, funky lime: Thank you for your answers!
Not consciously - but it's a straight 8ths-song, which also Stranglers did in most of their songs AFAIK.seismic1 wrote: 2) A little reminiscent of some Stranglers tracks?
Yeah, thanks!polysax wrote: Well done, glad to hear a band format!
It's the hidden message in the lyrics ... - just leave it.funky lime wrote: 1) i don't understand the question.
Ahhh, I see!funky lime wrote: ... drums are not driving enough (but then, i'm a snobby drummer ....)
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thecontrolcentre thecontrolcentre https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=76240
- KVRAF
- 35162 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny
1. I don't understand the question either. Can't make the lyrics out.enroe wrote:1. Is this song too provocative?
2. What is your first spontaneous thought after listening?
3. What would you change in this song?
2. I'm hungry
3. I'd make it shorter and lose the guitar "solos".
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2586 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany
OOhh Interesting! But sure I'll conceal this statement to our guitarist!thecontrolcentre wrote: 3. I'd make it shorter and lose the guitar "solos".
Thanks Controlcentre!