KVR Audio

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Wed Jun 27, 2012 2:28 am

I think it is so much better now. All I did really was add a pad to it and extend the build up at the end but it was a ton of work!

If anyone hears anything off please let me know, also if you like it please let me know too!

link: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... D=11734038

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:37 am

went back and reworked this some. I hope it is better now!

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:32 pm

Yes, yes, speechless! It must be awesome

Vintage73 · Post by **Vintage73** » Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:50 pm

I like it.

The only criticism I might have is that it might need a little more bottom end. The kick is a bit thin.

Other than that, I love the energy in this piece, and it's very pleasing to my ears.

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:20 pm

4lb Kitty wrote:I like it.

The only criticism I might have is that it might need a little more bottom end. The kick is a bit thin.

Other than that, I love the energy in this piece, and it's very pleasing to my ears.

Thanks for the constructive advice! I am glad your ears like it

I agree compared to some of my other songs the kick sounds thinner. I think I could add some bottom end just to the kick to fix this.

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Fri Jun 29, 2012 1:03 am

A nice light touch on here, with pleasant melodic contributions. That snare might benefit from just a little more LF as well. Not too much, or the track will lose the light vibe that it currently has.

Good work

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Fri Jun 29, 2012 1:23 am

seismic1 wrote:A nice light touch on here, with pleasant melodic contributions. That snare might benefit from just a little more LF as well. Not too much, or the track will lose the light vibe that it currently has.

Good work

Thank you also for the good comments. I just went back and put a little more bass on all the drums with the master drum buss. Actually a touch of high end too, but not much.

If anyone has any more constructive criticism I am all ears. I stayed up all night doing this so my ears are sort of shot. It helps to get feedback like that!

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Fri Jun 29, 2012 2:37 am

just put up a free high rez download for anyone who likes the song.

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:15 pm

I think that's better. Those drums have a "fuller" sound without upsetting the mood of the track

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:28 pm

seismic1 wrote:I think that's better. Those drums have a "fuller" sound without upsetting the mood of the track

agreed! Thanks so mcuh, it did really need that!

Vintage73 · Post by **Vintage73** » Fri Jun 29, 2012 10:40 pm

Yes, it sounds much better now. As seismic1 said, fuller.

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Fri Jun 29, 2012 11:12 pm

4lb Kitty wrote:Yes, it sounds much better now. As seismic1 said, fuller.

Thanks to you and seismic1

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Sat Jun 30, 2012 11:28 am

Nicely arranged and a really pleasant listen - the different synth lines work very well together. Lovely work!

bluedad · Post by **bluedad** » Sat Jun 30, 2012 4:33 pm

polyslax wrote:Nicely arranged and a really pleasant listen - the different synth lines work very well together. Lovely work!

I agree, well done. Deceptively simple synth lines, this stuff is harder to do than imagined.
And you do it very well.

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Sat Jun 30, 2012 7:14 pm

Thanks you all, very kind words.

"Silver And Black" By Alex Cooper (reworked it!)