RoboPimp (electro-pop)

[Kraku]

Here's my latest track. This time it's some kind of electro-pop.
All feedback is welcome.

YOUTUBE: Aflecht - RoboPimp
MP3: Aflecht - RoboPimp


-------LYRICS------

this ain't your day
fix up your face

fix up lips shoes
pushups hips boobs
handbag earrings
dried up nose bleed

makeup bruises
change your clothes and
get back there you
need to suck

don't you worry babe
they asked you by name hey
bring their money in yeah
flow their juices in ya

and smile when you meet them
they'll want you much more then
white stuff helps you get there
this will ease your pain yeah

bruised eyes and lips
didn't want you this
this ain't your day
fix up your face

[seismic1]

Nice track. I Am The Walrus meets the Human League. I liked the vocal treatments and the bass synth was nice and meaty.

Good work

[Kraku]

Hey thanks for the comment I thought no-one would comment on the track.

[bstageboss]

Cool stuff. I'm thinking the vocoder vocals could be a little further up front, for intelligibility's sake, but that's just me. Having the lyrics helps, though.

Still, a nice track and there are some vivid (grim) images conjured up. Like it.

STV

[tezdelay]

nice electro

[Kraku]

Yay, thanks!