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Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Fri Mar 22, 2013 9:33 am

www.youreallfree.com/music/YAF_GhostTravel.mp3

I dreamed I was a spirit
floating free through air
through molecules and planets
A breeze playing with your hair

I dreamed I was the sun
the source of all that lives
I thought I came full circle
The hand which takes and gives

When I woke up from this dream
I was just the ghost in the machine

I dreamed we were connected
A chemical reaction made us one
A symphony perfected
A battle that was already won

But now I stand corrected
You and I were simply tides and waves
And every day a dream is resurrected
Can you count the cradles and the graves?

When we woke up from our dream
We were just the ghost in the machine

core · Post by **core** » Fri Mar 22, 2013 12:18 pm

Impressive tune Remco. Emotional...

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Fri Mar 22, 2013 8:52 pm

Thank you so much!
This was put together too damn quick
Lots of computergenerated stuff

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Sat Mar 23, 2013 2:40 am

Quick or not it's damn sweet Remmie!

Allomerus · Post by **Allomerus** » Sat Mar 23, 2013 4:18 am

Sometimes things put together quickly work better than tracks you agonise over.
This song is a case in point. The music fits the lyrics and singing perfectly.
Excellent vocals and backing!

macmurphy · Post by **macmurphy** » Sat Mar 23, 2013 5:37 pm

musically, emotionally and lyrically warm, this is just beautiful

neil.

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Sat Mar 23, 2013 6:10 pm

You made this just for me?

Another great tune. You don't need a fancy backing track when you can sing that well.

folderol · Post by **folderol** » Sat Mar 23, 2013 7:07 pm

A lovely gentle (slightly sad) song. I can't even produce something like that slowly taking my time, let alone as a 'quick' composition.

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Sun Mar 24, 2013 12:16 am

Great song, Remmie, and with a natural, relaxed style.

Good work

PurpleCatfishBettie · Post by **PurpleCatfishBettie** » Sun Mar 24, 2013 3:11 am

yeah, great singing. do you think the vocals need any 'de-essing' at all, or is it these headphones?

be that as it may; from the opening, the 'dimitri-kabalevsky-esque' 'electric piano' is a great underpinning. that alone probably could have carried the voice through the piece.

the way it actually evolves and 'crescendos' is really cool in any event. among other things, it's got a real '70s pop' (gary wright, 10cc) kind of vibe.

whoah... it just hit me... the singing here is a kind of like jackson browne; but with more interesting lyrics...

anyway, all my little nits and stream-of-consciousness aside; wow, cool!

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Mon Mar 25, 2013 2:38 pm

mrblitz wrote:yeah, great singing. do you think the vocals need any 'de-essing' at all, or is it these headphones?

be that as it may; from the opening, the 'dimitri-kabalevsky-esque' 'electric piano' is a great underpinning. that alone probably could have carried the voice through the piece.

the way it actually evolves and 'crescendos' is really cool in any event. among other things, it's got a real '70s pop' (gary wright, 10cc) kind of vibe.

whoah... it just hit me... the singing here is a kind of like jackson browne; but with more interesting lyrics...

anyway, all my little nits and stream-of-consciousness aside; wow, cool!

nah, its your headphone

Or the Careless Whispers effect revisited

Anyway ... thanks a milion pal!

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Mon Mar 25, 2013 7:16 pm

Nice choice of kick...has bounce, fantastic lyric and vocals !...great sounds going on in the background. Complex arrangement that works very well.

Thanks!

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Wed Mar 27, 2013 2:31 pm

thanks pal! that kick is done with marvins bdx.
i use it often.

astrochimp · Post by **astrochimp** » Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:34 am

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Mon Apr 01, 2013 6:29 pm

astrochimp wrote:

Thanks sir

Made this one for you.