Embrace The Horse Flu [Unreleased Techno]

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KVRist
240 posts since 9 Dec, 2013

Post Tue Jan 27, 2015 2:47 pm

Greetings everybody!

This is an experimental song which I decided to not give away to public, just on forums in order to receive feedbacks.


https://soundcloud.com/brain-claim/embr ... ed/s-WkpCJ

KVRAF
2279 posts since 18 Oct, 2010 from Japan

Post Tue Jan 27, 2015 11:11 pm

I like the classic return to a proper techno genre.
The upper range on the attack of the kick is a bit too present, imo.
I do like the bass, I can feel it, but it's so very loose, it doesn't feel connected to the kick. I think if you had the kick driving the bass with some compression it would tighten up the rhythm a lot and add quite a bit more excitement.
The track also never seems to go anywhere, although I suppose that's the genre. It starts and ends the same as much as the middle and climax are just the same. Very boring.

EDIT
rewrote post after a second listen.

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KVRist

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240 posts since 9 Dec, 2013

Post Wed Jan 28, 2015 11:03 am

Thanks for Your listening! I agree with You, I didn't connect the bass and kick too much, this song was not just well done. And the excitement is really missing :) In my first album I am watching for these mistakes. I appreciate Your feedback! :)

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