bring us war

[raymond]

bring us war

[vurt]

i like the track but the vocals,need more
just more confidence your holding back a little it sounds like and from what i can tell you dont need to
good mix tho and like i said the tune is great specially like the distorted perc
but just be a little more confident with the vocals
because you can sing

[bluedad]

yeah, good track. I like those glitchy beats
just, as vurt says, bring up the vocals just a bit.

[Sicklecell666]

yeah, good track. I like those glitchy beats
just, as vurt says, bring up the vocals just a bit.

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[raymond]

yeah certain parts of the vocals i'm not happy with, especially the beginning of the first verse (it's all off tune), i'll probably do a few retakes tonight when i get off work. how about the guitar level? did that seem too quiet to anyone? it sounds quiet here on my office speakers.

thanks for the comments guys.

-raymond

[Rouqmirg]

I have some mixed feelings on this. I really like the quality of your voice, and the texture it provides to the song, however as you know it is out of tune occasionally. Once you fix the vocals this track will be tons more powerful, especially the chorus section, which I really like. I would recommend removing some of the noisy percussion from the verse sections, I think sometimes they detract more than enhance. Hope my comments help some.

Rouq

[raymond]

if people besides myself hear that it's out of tune, then i know for sure my ears aren't just playing tricks on me, so yeah every comment helps.

[bluedad]

yeah, good track. I like those glitchy beats
just, as vurt says, bring up the vocals just a bit.

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