KVR Audio

thenumber23 · Post by **thenumber23** » Sun Jul 25, 2004 7:22 pm

Hey all. After a month of not writing any stuff, I wrote this tune - unfortunately, I feel a little rusty. It's about 3 1/2 minutes, but should provide about one minute of enjoyment

Inside Doubt

It uses FM7, Xphraze, Reason, Ravity(R), Trilogy, and Albino.

Brian

Polychrome · Post by **Polychrome** » Tue Jul 27, 2004 1:25 am

I agree with your self-crit.

This could provide the foundation elements for a fine track, however. The (maybe fm7) bellish motif to me is a bit cheesy right now and could maybe be transformed into a big sawish lead them that only appears a couple times, during a longer arrangement.

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Tue Jul 27, 2004 5:50 am

Indeed that bell-sequence needs to be replaced or prcessed way more. The cheesy character of it just stands in the way of the very cool and deep drive that the tune has. Loving the part from 1.36 on, although I do hear that it clicks there at times; not sure what is going on there.

You have something here that could easily become a big blast of a tune.

thenumber23 · Post by **thenumber23** » Tue Jul 27, 2004 6:30 am

Cool, thanks for the comments and critisicms.

The click is due to me moving the mod wheel too fast in Trilogy. I didn't yet update my Trilogy app to the latest version, so it's possible that would fix it. ...that click is real annoying, isn't it?

If ever I crack it open I'll also address the cheezy bell sound too

Brian

Dance song: Inside Doubt