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Gucky · Post by **Gucky** » Fri Apr 12, 2019 7:57 pm

Today I made a remake of one of my old songs "The brain".
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/the-brain

I added a real funk guitar from Freddy Schlender and I made some other changes.
Hope you like it.
Your feedback is welcome.

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Sat Apr 13, 2019 12:36 am

There were parts of this I really liked. @3:43 nice to hear that guitar coming in. Really gives it another dimension.
From 4:21-end, I feel some of the fat could be trimmed off in that period.
2:20->3:00 Nice mellow section there.
The voice narration was a bit too much overdone for me in the first half of the song. It got boring pretty quickly.
Overall, liked it, thought it had a unique vibe.

Gucky · Post by **Gucky** » Sat Apr 13, 2019 7:23 am

Hi bansaw,
many thanks for your feedback.
I shortened now the text a little bit and I made some other little changes.
Here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/the-brain
It is now better for you?

New Faber track "The brain"