[Electronic] tm-Away

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mindstuff
KVRer
26 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Post Mon Apr 15, 2019 7:56 am

Comments/questions welcome. Thx.

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Last edited by mindstuff on Mon Apr 15, 2019 10:36 am, edited 2 times in total.

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wagtunes
KVRAF
15253 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: [Electronic] tm-Away

Post Mon Apr 15, 2019 9:03 am

My Feedback

Music - 4
Instruments - 7
Performance - 7
Mix - 6

Overall - 6

Comments: Too much low mid. EQ is your friend. From 1:30 on a little better. Musically, not much to this. It's just a chord progression over and over with an ARP coming in a little later. Not enough variety to sustain a 5 minute track even with the occasional arrangement changes, dropping of drums, etc. It's just monotonous. A melody would really be nice. Klangy bell stuff towards the end could probably use some LPF. Way too loud.

mindstuff
KVRer
26 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: [Electronic] tm-Away

Post Mon Apr 15, 2019 10:42 am

wagtunes wrote:
Mon Apr 15, 2019 9:03 am
My Feedback

Music - 4
Instruments - 7
Performance - 7
Mix - 6

Overall - 6

Comments: Too much low mid. EQ is your friend. From 1:30 on a little better. Musically, not much to this. It's just a chord progression over and over with an ARP coming in a little later. Not enough variety to sustain a 5 minute track even with the occasional arrangement changes, dropping of drums, etc. It's just monotonous. A melody would really be nice. Klangy bell stuff towards the end could probably use some LPF. Way too loud.
Yeah I see the point about the end being too loud, but I like loud! However not that much though so tweaked it a bit more.

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