[rock:] How can she escape

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enroe
KVRian
999 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany

Post Sun Jul 07, 2019 8:02 am

After nearly one year we've a new song:

direct link: http://enroe.bplaced.net/21_mn/23_songs ... escape.mp3

animation link: "How can she escape"

video link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2P62IN5SJ2k

The song shows the ambiguity of an obsessive love and the resulting
emotional dilemma (if anyone bothers).

Thank you if you listened.
And yes: Every feedback is appreciated. :wink:
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de

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vurt
addled muppet weed
46974 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass

Re: [rock:] How can she escape

Post Sun Jul 07, 2019 8:26 am

mix sounds good except for at some points the vocals seem a little low, so im not able to pick them up.
otherwise sounds like its the start of a great track, if we get to hear you sing ;)

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Bansaw
KVRian
620 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: [rock:] How can she escape

Post Sun Jul 07, 2019 3:15 pm

I really like the track - I think its well written.
I like your voice too.
The video: I think it could be more animated. E.g. instead of a static body shot of you singing, how about walking with the camera. The music is moving , the video should be moving as well.
On the music front , great. Not sure about the vocoder at 3:45. I know its depicting a "nightmare" but...
Overall though , great. :tu:

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Frantz
KVRAF
5098 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Re: [rock:] How can she escape

Post Sun Jul 07, 2019 6:47 pm

Another imaginative piece from you with characters dealing with emotional drama. BTW, the lyrics are here.

I think the production and vocals are as good or better than your previous songs. The chorus is memorable. I thought the nightmare part (mask + voice change) of the video was quite effective. Great job. :tu:

enroe
KVRian
999 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany

Re: [rock:] How can she escape

Post Sun Jul 07, 2019 11:00 pm

@vurt:

Thank you! :)

@Bansaw:

Also thank your for your kind words! And yes - at the deep vocal part the opinions differ. :)

@Frantz:

Yeah, thank you. Also until now I didn't use the comment-function at Youtube, but now you started to go there ... well then ... :)
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de

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markkuja
KVRian
813 posts since 28 Oct, 2005 from Finland

Re: [rock:] How can she escape

Post Mon Jul 08, 2019 12:46 am

Excellent rock pop song with old time vibe. Good mix and sounds

enroe
KVRian
999 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany

Re: [rock:] How can she escape

Post Tue Jul 09, 2019 2:32 am

markkuja wrote:
Mon Jul 08, 2019 12:46 am
Excellent rock pop song with old time vibe. Good mix and sounds
Thank you!
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de

enroe
KVRian
999 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany

Re: [rock:] How can she escape

Post Thu Jul 11, 2019 10:17 pm

Bansaw wrote:
Sun Jul 07, 2019 3:15 pm
The video: I think it could be more animated. E.g. instead of a static body shot
of you singing, how about walking with the camera.
Relating to the video:

Doobidoo ... :dog: you're totally right: At the video there's much space
for improvement. This video is more or less a first "fast shot". The
goal was to create something without investing too much effort and
time. You clearly realized this "fast creation"-way - thank you for
pointing this out. It is highly apprectiated - we're disscssing next
videos with your words in mind!
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de

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