[rock:] How can she escape

[enroe]

After nearly one year we've a new song:

direct link: http://enroe.bplaced.net/21_mn/23_songs ... escape.mp3

animation link: "How can she escape"

video link:

The song shows the ambiguity of an obsessive love and the resulting
emotional dilemma (if anyone bothers).

Thank you if you listened.
And yes: Every feedback is appreciated.

[vurt]

mix sounds good except for at some points the vocals seem a little low, so im not able to pick them up.
otherwise sounds like its the start of a great track, if we get to hear you sing

[Bansaw]

I really like the track - I think its well written.
I like your voice too.
The video: I think it could be more animated. E.g. instead of a static body shot of you singing, how about walking with the camera. The music is moving , the video should be moving as well.
On the music front , great. Not sure about the vocoder at 3:45. I know its depicting a "nightmare" but...
Overall though , great.

[Frantz]

Another imaginative piece from you with characters dealing with emotional drama. BTW, the lyrics are here.

I think the production and vocals are as good or better than your previous songs. The chorus is memorable. I thought the nightmare part (mask + voice change) of the video was quite effective. Great job.

[enroe]

@vurt:

Thank you!

@Bansaw:

Also thank your for your kind words! And yes - at the deep vocal part the opinions differ.

@Frantz:

Yeah, thank you. Also until now I didn't use the comment-function at Youtube, but now you started to go there ... well then ...

[markkuja]

Excellent rock pop song with old time vibe. Good mix and sounds

[enroe]

Excellent rock pop song with old time vibe. Good mix and sounds

Thank you!

[enroe]

The video: I think it could be more animated. E.g. instead of a static body shot
of you singing, how about walking with the camera.

Relating to the video:

Doobidoo ... you're totally right: At the video there's much space
for improvement. This video is more or less a first "fast shot". The
goal was to create something without investing too much effort and
time. You clearly realized this "fast creation"-way - thank you for
pointing this out. It is highly apprectiated - we're disscssing next
videos with your words in mind!