Hola Musicfriends,
I write a new song!
Mysterious Times
Movie Music
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 86 posts since 29 Dec, 2014
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- KVRist
- 182 posts since 10 Feb, 2005 from Germany
Very nice - what your using for this great track. it reminds me on the film from roman polanski´s "Tanz der Vampire". The chor (of a woman?) in the background - genius!
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- KVRAF
- 5811 posts since 27 Jul, 2001 from Tarpon Springs, Florida, USA
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- KVRist
- 386 posts since 14 Feb, 2013
Some constructive critique:
1. The violins sound fake, I know we all use virtual instruments, but I can hear you already do some control of the dynamics.
Perhaps increasing these dynamics to enhance emotional impact might help on the realism. Also, I miss some bow change on the strings and fade-out of the string patches, ie. when the violin gets near the end, it should fade out the sound.
2. Composition wise, I'd prefer more variation. Right now, it's almost the same all the way through. Creating a secondary theme, and also re-arranging it + re-orchestrating it, with some fast, slow and medium passages might help. At least, that's what I expect from film music.
1. The violins sound fake, I know we all use virtual instruments, but I can hear you already do some control of the dynamics.
Perhaps increasing these dynamics to enhance emotional impact might help on the realism. Also, I miss some bow change on the strings and fade-out of the string patches, ie. when the violin gets near the end, it should fade out the sound.
2. Composition wise, I'd prefer more variation. Right now, it's almost the same all the way through. Creating a secondary theme, and also re-arranging it + re-orchestrating it, with some fast, slow and medium passages might help. At least, that's what I expect from film music.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 86 posts since 29 Dec, 2014
Hello everybody,
Thanks for listen my track!!
when the violin gets near the end, it should fade out the sound.
Yes thats right ,thanks for that!
Greetings André
Thanks for listen my track!!
when the violin gets near the end, it should fade out the sound.
Yes thats right ,thanks for that!
Greetings André
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- KVRAF
- 5811 posts since 27 Jul, 2001 from Tarpon Springs, Florida, USA
Just to clarify I listened to your track as ambient music.
I Know it does not have the sound of a typical ambient music but it is I who listened and enjoyed it.
My Studio: viewtopic.php?f=4&t=7760&p=7777146#p7777146
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- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
I agree about the fake sounds. These are REALLY bad. Almost unlistenable. Musically, it's not bad. But the sounds. Ugh.
Had to turn it off mid way.
Had to turn it off mid way.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 86 posts since 29 Dec, 2014
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- KVRAF
- 5811 posts since 27 Jul, 2001 from Tarpon Springs, Florida, USA
Gotta say if this was played by a real orchestra (and you conducting) I can only imagine how much better it would sound.Kalamata Kid wrote: ↑Thu May 21, 2020 8:31 pmJust to clarify I listened to your track as ambient music.
I Know it does not have the sound of a typical ambient music but it is I who listened and enjoyed it.
My Studio: viewtopic.php?f=4&t=7760&p=7777146#p7777146
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- KVRAF
- 3879 posts since 28 Jun, 2009 from Wherever I lay my hat
I just came over from playing Anno 1800, and this would have been good background music for it. The "fake" sounds didn't bother me in the slightest, the track gets its mood across and evokes a slightly tense, moody atmosphere. As a side note, I think it's hilarious that the supreme purveyor of fake, overly constructed and robotic music in this forum has the gall to put down your track, which is more musical than anything he's ever posted. Don't let yourself be bothered by it.
I have to admit to skipping ahead here and there, as there wasn't enough going on to grab my attention, but, as I said, as background music: well done!
I have to admit to skipping ahead here and there, as there wasn't enough going on to grab my attention, but, as I said, as background music: well done!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 86 posts since 29 Dec, 2014
Hello Ariston,ariston wrote: ↑Sun May 24, 2020 6:24 am I just came over from playing Anno 1800, and this would have been good background music for it. The "fake" sounds didn't bother me in the slightest, the track gets its mood across and evokes a slightly tense, moody atmosphere. As a side note, I think it's hilarious that the supreme purveyor of fake, overly constructed and robotic music in this forum has the gall to put down your track, which is more musical than anything he's ever posted. Don't let yourself be bothered by it.
I have to admit to skipping ahead here and there, as there wasn't enough going on to grab my attention, but, as I said, as background music: well done!
Thank you and nice words
Greetings André.
