Airing Of Grievances

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Created on an iPad with Cubasis, an Apple Pencil, a pair of decent headphones, and a few common apps. Any thoughts?

https://soundcloud.com/paulieworld/airing-of-grievances

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I think you've got something here. In my humble opinion, some of the parts (such as the arpeggiated bit) could benefit from more separation in the mix, as I think they could add more interest to the track than simply blending into the background texture.
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tonedef71 wrote: Sat Mar 30, 2024 7:18 pm I think you've got something here. In my humble opinion, some of the parts (such as the arpeggiated bit) could benefit from more separation in the mix, as I think they could add more interest to the track than simply blending into the background texture.
Thank you for the feedback. Much appreciated. I have quite a bit of material on SoundCloud and I am thinking about compiling it into albums. I joined this forum because the members often provide constructive criticism. I am always curious to know what others think, and how I can improve. I will give this another listen with your suggestions in mind. Thank you for listening!

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Wow this one goes full in your face; it's heavy.

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WayneD123 wrote: Thu Apr 04, 2024 12:16 pm Wow this one goes full in your face; it's heavy.
Yeah, I try to do something different every time. This was inspired by an episode of Seinfeld. Festivus! And by Vyvyan from The Young Ones.

Hey, are you the jazz guy? I hope you get going on SoundCloud. There are plenty of people who would dig your music. Have a good one!

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