Some Merry Christmas Techno🧑‍🎄

[RTFX]

Hi guys any chance i can get some feedback on my new tune?
Its an uptempo hardtechno rave track with female vocals.
Please tell me where’s the room for improvement!

[kmonkey]

For starters, the video thumbnail is terrible. Then, I don't think you really understand what techno is. If you did, you'd realize that you mixed up at least four genres in the description. And I finally listened to the song. The energy is there. I wouldn't call it techno, but okay. The energy is there, but something harsh is piercing my ears. I couldn't figure out what, so I'll just say something in the middle.

[wagtunes]

There's no width to this mix. It almost sounds mono. I think it needs to breathe a little more. Musically, it's fine. But I would really remix this because it's lifeless.

[RTFX]

For starters, the video thumbnail is terrible. Then, I don't think you really understand what techno is. If you did, you'd realize that you mixed up at least four genres in the description. And I finally listened to the song. The energy is there. I wouldn't call it techno, but okay. The energy is there, but something harsh is piercing my ears. I couldn't figure out what, so I'll just say something in the middle.

Thnx for tuning in kmonkey. I appreciate it a lot!
The piercing thing occurs the whole track or during the chorus? If the latter, I layered the vocals of the chorus and ran them through a vocoder. This generated some harsh freqs I bandcompressed to my best abilities. I checked the track on 5 diff speakers and on 2/5 the freqs still came through. Since the 3 ok checks were in majority, I left it as it is now.

[RTFX]

There's no width to this mix. It almost sounds mono. I think it needs to breathe a little more. Musically, it's fine. But I would really remix this because it's lifeless.

thnx for tuning in wagtunes. Appreciated!
I’ll take your feedback into account for my next tune.
Hopefully I get that track to feel more alive to your taste.
Thnx again!