Suggestions on new song

[luisevalencia]

http://www.sql2005rp.com/sql2005rp/1.mp3

Hell this is my 2 minute song. I want to hear suggestions on mastering and anything else

I applied izotope ozone to the kick loop. and some reverbs and delays(fl studio effects) to some sounds before and after the 32 beats.

What do you think about the break? I am not sure about it yet.

Is this the right forum to post about it? I didnt know where else to post about it.

Thanks

[carlos]

Catchy break, it progresses ok, a little short in length for the genre though, I can not comment on mastering needs due to crap speakers (but sounds reasonable!) it probably needs very short vocal snippets to accentuate the build ups/changes of rhythm, its got a holiday feel to it though!!

[luisevalencia]

Its not the complete song. Its only the beginning but I would like to hear more comments.

Please