Asking for a review on my track
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 14 posts since 19 May, 2017
Hey,
So i made my first track (dont be discouraged yet please) wanted others thought on it.
I dont know where im at after my first 5 months
(3 of them been alot procastinating and giving up, heh -remember the feeling?)
I dont feel i can judge my own track versus others at my experience level (cause im so new in this), hoping maybe you can be the judge for it?
Song: https://soundcloud.com/user-301923379/wraps/s-1enO9
Can someone also tell me what genre this is?
Thanks in advance,
Hawken.-
So i made my first track (dont be discouraged yet please) wanted others thought on it.
I dont know where im at after my first 5 months
(3 of them been alot procastinating and giving up, heh -remember the feeling?)
I dont feel i can judge my own track versus others at my experience level (cause im so new in this), hoping maybe you can be the judge for it?
Song: https://soundcloud.com/user-301923379/wraps/s-1enO9
Can someone also tell me what genre this is?
Thanks in advance,
Hawken.-
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- KVRist
- 399 posts since 9 Oct, 2008 from Holland, Den Haag
At 5 months its pretty good
dont worry about genre, keep making what you make
the rewards can be very high, so can be the frustration
dont worry about genre, keep making what you make
the rewards can be very high, so can be the frustration
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
mix is good, arangement is on the right track with pauses and change ups. perhaps extend it and add an endiing?
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
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- KVRian
- 950 posts since 30 Nov, 2004
it's dancy ish.
It's clearly a beginner tune, but better than most beginners. The arrangement is quite good.
I would work on your melodic skills next, try to really tell a story
It's clearly a beginner tune, but better than most beginners. The arrangement is quite good.
I would work on your melodic skills next, try to really tell a story