Game Over
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 22 posts since 2 Dec, 2017 from USA
https://soundcloud.com/thealterednative ... -the-favor
Workout music:
https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/smack
https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/all-night-long
https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/game-over
Any feedback is welcomed,
Thank you,
Tracy
Workout music:
https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/smack
https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/all-night-long
https://soundcloud.com/thealterednatives/game-over
Any feedback is welcomed,
Thank you,
Tracy
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aaron aardvark aaron aardvark https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=248508
- KVRAF
- 2667 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles
Webothwin,
Thank you for the review! Now your song "Smack": danceable. Yes, you could work out to this. Sounds slightly menacing, which is fine by me. Drums could be louder, or have more punch; some compression could help. Some pretty cool synths. A little repetitive, though I suppose that works for workout music. What state or country are you from? The song has a European vibe for me.
Thank you for the review! Now your song "Smack": danceable. Yes, you could work out to this. Sounds slightly menacing, which is fine by me. Drums could be louder, or have more punch; some compression could help. Some pretty cool synths. A little repetitive, though I suppose that works for workout music. What state or country are you from? The song has a European vibe for me.
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You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 22 posts since 2 Dec, 2017 from USA
Thank you for checking it out. I am in America and while it is already released your advise certainly helps me out a lot. Thank you for the feedback! I will seek critique before I release next time.
Tracy
Tracy
- KVRAF
- 1988 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
First two were very driven and powerful and had a certain appeal, but for me really crowded in the mid range. Being heavy in the mid range can be OK for short times here and there, but having 4 minutes of it can be fatiguing.
Sometimes "less is more".
Sometimes "less is more".
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
all the tracks lack dynamic range, they are quite squashed, that IMO
is what makes a track "fatiging" combine that with instruments not taking turns (crowding) AND lots of repetition and it can force an early break from listening.
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 22 posts since 2 Dec, 2017 from USA
I really appreciate the criticism as I am always trying to improve. Your comments will definitely help me make better choices!
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 22 posts since 2 Dec, 2017 from USA
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 22 posts since 2 Dec, 2017 from USA